Ummm, I was kinda expecting that but not that way.

Ok, you really know how to EXPLODE the genre of the comic Loudcest, don't you? That was a genius twist you managed between the craziness of the Loud House. I really liked it and wonder if you will write more with that humor you write so well. After all, sometimes I seemed a crazy person laughing suddenly while reading lines from your stories. That's on you. :) Great day

Great story. The end made me laugh out loud and scratch my head at the same time. It takes a rare talent to provoke that kind of response in me. Kudos.

This was a fantastic little thing. Great job keeping the humor running and letting things flow so well.

I’m really digging your writing style. It’s somehow off kilter and smooth simultaneously. This is also a simple idea that you turned into something fun. Impressively done.

I remember reading this and thought it was a nice, good, funny little story.
It's still true for today.

*snicker* Nice twist.

What a wonderful little fic. I kind of blanked on it when it was first posted since I saw the wordcount and, admittedly, I've always been into longer stuff since I feel like it gives me more time to really get lost in the story. Still, after enjoying Aces Wild so much I wanted to at least give it a look since now I know what a good writer you are and I really do love loudcest regardless.

Once I did the quality turned out to be as high as I expected. The same humor and skill you display in making the kids really feel like themselves in that story is also very present in this one. I just love it, it feels like I'm reading a stolen moment in the Loud house that took place between episodes. The light hearted humor and cheeky romance melds together to create something truly delicious. You really understand how to present these thoughts and eents in an amusing, charming way: '"He's also a buttface," Lola concluded, nodding her head in agreement.' is a great example. Then Luan's johnny-on-the-spot with those puns, Lisa's scientific explanation for dibs and 'But I SCANNED for her!' It's all so damn perfect. I've definitely gotta keep on eye on what you make from now on.

This story was... awesome! I'm glad I read it, especially the part with the Extreme Ultimate Pie Fighting contest. And the ending was superb, I was wondering how Leni was going to fit into this!

Had to quickly reread story, ending was funny!

I liked it though would've been better if it was longer, do you plan on continuing this story or is it a one-shot? Good story regardless

I like it.
Not much to say since not much info.
But I like it.

Definitely fav and follow.

I freaking loved hearing about this idea and I’m so pleased you used my suggestion with Leni. :D This was hilarious dude! You did a really great job with it! Hehe. Especially loved how you described Leni at the end~ and Luan’s pun was amazing! Seriously great job, man!