Your Feedback/Grading for Assignment #6

Examiner: Lizzy

Grade: 20/20 - O (Outstanding)

Feedback: "I'm crying, this is so sweet. I forget how much I adore Neville and then I read something like this and it brings all my love back to the surface. I love his and Sprout's relationship and their love of plants. I've never really given Pomona much thought but it was interesting to see a little of her backstory here. It was a unique character choice, writing about such an underused professor. Flow was perfect. You definitely fulfilled the prompt, and I'm glad you chose to write about the pair after Neville had already left Hogwarts. It made it more original. The whole thing was so fluffy and adorable, and it was lovely to see Neville being praised and valued for his strengths. I absolutely love it. :) No spag mistakes, and all extra critera met, well done."