That was a wonderful chapter. UltimateDisneyInfinityFan, please keep up the good work as always. Okay, now do I have an idea for you on a new story: The Mr. Incredible Files! We've heard all about The Elastigirl Files and The Speed Demon Files, and now, we want to hear about The Mr. Incredible Files, and in the first chapter of that story, Bob a.k.a. Mr. Incredible comes home from work after a long day, and is exhausted. The next day, Helen, Violet, Dash, and Jack-Jack try to make him feel better, and that lifts Bob's spirits a little bit. Let me know what you think of that idea, please!

~Incrediblesfan1

Awwww that's sweet its gonna get real fluffy in the next chapters with so many hugs and kisses.
I'm telling you, MAKE A VIOLET VERSION, PLEASEEE!

That was a beautiful chapter! (Hand clap of praise) Bravo! Bravo! Well, do I have another request for your next chapter of this story: Eric and Dash return to the Parr residence, where a big "Welcome Home, Speed Demon" banner is inside the living room, with Bob, Helen, Violet, Mirage, Karen, Jack-Jack, Edna, Lucious, Winston, and the Wannabes surprising Dash, and there's cake, cards, and gifts of apologies, forgiveness, and reconciliation involved in the surprise. That's my suggestion! :-)

~Incrediblesfan1

UltimateDisneyInfinityFan, you're working fast with this story, and I have to say that I am impressed. Like I said before, you do brilliant work. Now, with that being said, do I have another request for your next chapter: The Parrs, Mirage, and Karen all get on Eric's communicator and eventually blow Eric's cover, trying to talk to Dash and convince him to come home. This makes Dash very scared and upset, and Eric is forced to do something drastic in order to get Dash and the rest of his family in the same room to work through their problems. Hopefully you take this request into mind. :-)

~Incrediblesfan1

Omggg I fluffin cried :'(
That song was sooo sad, I was actually getting Spongebob vibes, and I'm telling, I AM TELLING YOU, when this one's finished, you have to make a Violet version to this one, You Must :D
Violet runs away, and then, this scene also applies to that one, you have to do it ;)
Keep going here, I can't wait until they all reunite again 3

That was a beautiful chapter, UltimateDisneyInfinityFan. Beautiful work as always. Since you're taking my request over the course of this story into mind, I just want to say thank you. Please keep all your readers posted on your stories. Don't forget to update.

~Incrediblesfan1

Alrighty then! Now that Bob, Helen, Violet, Mirage, and Karen have Eric on their side in searching for their missing Speed Demon, here's hoping that Eric will find Dash eventually and maybe, just maybe, convince him that some familiar people will still need him to help fight crime. In the meantime, do I have a good request for your next chapter: Dash is settling somewhere safe, away from his family and friends, on a very recognizable island that we know all too well, when all of a sudden Eric arrives on that island and claims to just want to talk to Dash and keep him company. Hopefully you take this request into mind, and keep up the good work as always please.

~Incrediblesfan1

Heh...you gave Dash the code name Speed Demon too? So glad I'm not the only one.

Good start to this story, UltimateDisneyInfinityFan. The prologue kind of reminds me of the sad scene from the 1993 movie, "Dennis the Menace", where Mr. Wilson (played by the late Walter Matthau) coldly admonishes Dennis (played by Mason Gamble) for "being a pest, a menace, and a spoiled, unruly, selfish little boy" that he no longer has any use for. Mr. Wilson then bumps Dennis aside, rudely telling him to get out of his way after telling him he doesn't want anything to do with. This makes Dennis extremely upset and he runs away. In the next scene, however, Mr. Wilson tries to find Dennis after he realizes that his cold words had really hurt his feelings.
So that's a butt load of drama right there. Can't wait for your next chapter. :-)

~Incrediblesfan1

Omg this is so suspenseful, pls update!
And I like how you included rain in the part where Dash was starting to get sad.
Its the most dramatic thing in movies.

What's next, Violet runs away?