OMG I loved this chapter so much and FINALLY! Also, thank you do much for giving us THIS before all the outlines!

Omggggg one of my most favorite HO character's is Dobby and I was so so sad he died. I loveeee Tipsy in this story and Felt so so bad for Winky. PLEASEEEE protect Tipsy at all costs :'(

I hate you. I hate that its 2am and I can't stop reading. I glory in the amgst. This is all your fault. Give me more.

Wow, after everything thats changed, Peter broke out of Azkaban to... Scratch up the griffindore portrait? The Weasleys still won the lottery? What are the odds? With all the changes you've made here I couldn't possibly guess where this story will go next. You know what they say about butterflies and hurricanes, well, I guess butterflies act in mysterious ways in your universe.

Geez the romance in this story really is a joke a really keeps readers from wanting to continue to read. So OOC for Harry to jump from one girl to the next. Pointless dating doesn’t have any other reason aside from dating girls simply because their pretty. Playboy personality are not attractive. I like the Daphne ship but her character in your story plays no useful role and she hardly has personality aside from her love for Harry. Her jealousy and anger isn’t funny it’s sad when the person you like ignores your feelings. Harry is smart enough to realize that she likes him you just force him to act like he’s completely clueless. You just Drag the romance and it’s tiring you have pointless writing.

I was enjoying the story until chapter 28. The Rita Skeeter stuff is simply too much. He would know his rights, his parents would step in, Sirius would, etc. Anyway thanks for trying, but it is too hard to follow now.

Well final-fucking-ly! After 30 chapters and over 300,000 words, finally Harry and Daphne get together and BAM! Discontinued! Im not gonna read the short summaries since it will ruin the fun for me.. Hope it gets out of Hiatus :(...
I will admit though, it was a lovely fanfic, totally worth my time, binged it within 2 days!
Definitely will recommend this fanfic, do read, its wonderful! :)

I really really loved the character Lindsey so much u made me want to like her more than Daphne... ssucks that there was no proper goodbye.. i hope Harry meets her again some time

Absolutely loved it, Ive been on this site for a few years now and easily read over 100 fics (all 100K words) and this one is easily one of the if not the best one I've come across, absolutely loved your storytelling and just how realistic it was, you didn't make harry a god or heir to a billion houses or the general the way you wrote James and Lily deserves an award, you made them neglecting but didn't make them evil or unrealistically neglecting like most do, also I loved how you slowly and gradually made relations between harry and his parents get better, and harry and Daphne's charters are written perfectly I loved Roderick and all you characters overall brilliant brilliant story!

this is so wonderful!
this is like a perfect anime,

shameless canon rehash, i thought this will change but no.
I am done with this

Wow! Reading this story has been incredible! Good luck for any future stories you have planned - you are a really talented writer!

A beautiful story. One of the best in the WBWL genre that I have read. Loved Rodrick and Master Jerome. I have always liked a good story with developed OC's. Kudos

Damn, I’m finally catching up on updates, didn’t realize this would happen, kind of ironic that the last update I read was literally the 2nd to last chapter (Ch. 30) before it switched to the outlines. If only I stayed up to date for like another week lol. Nonetheless, thanks to both of you for all your hard work and efforts to getting this story done as much as possible! I really enjoyed it and at least we got to see Harry and Delf get together right before it ended. The outlines were interesting, felt like it stayed the exact same as canon but with less casualties which is still a big W in my book. Would’ve been awesome to see the marriage but we still got to see the epilogue. So once again thanks to both for everything you guys did and I can’t wait to see what other stuff y’all do in the future!

Cliché plots have always been my guilty pleasure to read. It was such a lovely surprise finding this WBWL fanfic. Your writing was more than coherent and and fun to read. I more than understand that your life took overafter all, writing for free should always take second priority over your livelihood. I really like the Potters' redemption arc. I've read a few fanfics like that and disliked it, as they always make the change too instant, whereas your Harry react to the Potters coldly at first, and warm up slowly. I hope you continue to write similar fanfics when you find the time!