So good please make gohan train with picollo please can you please make chichi a saiyain with making a magaian from otherworld who can make her a full saiyain with a spell please and please give goku his tail back

meh, though going different direction... it meh...

Please give goku kaioken

Its funny that bereft of their higher ki, Sayans so far are folding like lawn chairs against real martial artists. A lot of them are just highly-powered thugs, as are most of Freeza's men. Of course, I suspect things will change when Bardock's elites get fighting.

Is Bardock rebelling because Raditz was killed?

Wow Yamcha is badass here. Someone tell him that Saiyan women like men with B.P: Big Powerlevel.

So... Planet Vegeta exists still. I wonder, what gave them a stay of execution?

That whole thing about abandonment reminds me of how fucked up Vegeta Saiyan culture is. The Sadala Saiyans are a lot less screwed. I wonder if the reason their last Super Saiyan happened a millenia ago, is because their culture is so messed up, their never had the emotional capability to go Super?

Wait, did Puar turn himself into something to block the Power Ball?

What Bardock believes is interesting. Feels like the timeline got changed by a time traveler, but who?

I do wonder what will happen if Bardock discovers the Dragonballs. That could make things get real fast.

I love how badass Chaotzu is here, no lie. Tien too.

Ironically, I feel like this Chi-Chi might have a better marriage than her canon counterpart. She gets him far more than her canon counter-part, who became an horrible character by Z. Who knew Chayote was a good love councillor?

Can't wait to see Chayote firing the Devilmite Beam on Freeza.

Demon King Shura is a total bro and king. An evil demon he may be, but he honorable as hell. He and Piccolo clearly get each other.

With Piccolo being fully together, I suspect he will always keep pace with the Saiyans.

Is Piccolo using a demonic equivalent of Kaioken Giant Form?

Welp, so much for that dream of Chayote and Raditz fighting freeza on Namek while Goku sits in a healing tank.
Onward we go!

Talk about an unexpected cameo man!
My man Raditz!

Definitely was not expecting Blue to be even half as competent as you have him here.
Don’t think I didn’t catch that part where her foot slid through the dark Kinto cloud! I see what your doing. Maybe...

“It’s been fun meeting you Bulma’s dad”
Lol, yeah pretty much how 60% of casual viewers see his character. I wonder what Goku adn Chayote traveling together will be like...

Wow how long has it been since I’ve read this?
I can scarcely recall, anyway, I stumbled my way through many a dark rooms to return here and see what’s what.

This is great story I love chayote but please never let her lose her saiyan tail. I now why they do it in the anime but I hate it.

And things just got even wackier:

- Piccolo Junior being complete far earlier inside the Room of Spirit and Time.

- Kami is probably fused forever

- Orange Orbs with Black Stars... OH SHIT, its the Black Star Dragonballs! EVERYONE RUN!

Wow you write chapters fast, Capt Claymore!

I'm not gonna lie, I love me a big chunky DB story. I have been on a Dragonball roll for a while. This one feed me well. This tale is great and quite riveting.

This tale is quite weird and has a funny if a bit Deus Ex machiney start, but it goes well.

I find it interest how you dealt with Chayote's absurdly overpowered levels, showing how much of a brutish fighter she start out as - far weaker but more skilled martial artists had good advantage over her.

Chayote seemed weird at first, but then I came to realize that not only she was a saiyan, she herself was also pretty weird a saiyan. A kinda-lazy one? I like how she has been embracing Earth and its martial arts, especially considering she comes from sayan society and its "If you are born weak you suck" society where the only way to get strong is pretty much zenkais.

So, Chayote is a Legendary Sayan? I wonder if she is somehow related to Broly, or just a genetic freak.

What are Chayote and Goku's ages right now? Seems to me that Goku is 10 or so while Chayote is 14-15.

Now, things have finally set out at full pace. I find it interesting how you are dealing with the King Piccolo saga, whatwith everyone being more powerful due to Chayote's presence and more people doing trips to Korin and whatnot. Seeing Tien and Yamcha stomp Piccolo Daimao was hilarious.

You totally baited us with a Raditz ressurection, nice job.

Seems to me that you replaced Raditz's place in the narrative with (fused) King Piccolo. And btw, oh wow - I did not expect THAT, at all.

Would't a fused King Piccolo know about Namek as well? He could simply journey there, get their dragon balls and wish for youth. Or not - Nail (of Nail, NAAAAAAIL) fame would break him like a twig.

You know, if Kami is no longer Guardian of Earth, could they rejuvenate him before getting him back? He would be able to be affected by the Dragonballs.

Kuririn seems to be in the making to take a few levels of badass right now.

Pity, Gero is dead.

When are we getting the current power levels? I'm very curious to know how powerful fused King Piccolo is.

... oh common you screed up all the story i won't say he should be android strong but he should be Freeza strong or close how are they going to win this...

no me gusto. buenas noches