Please add Power Girl to the harem

I’m not completely sure on how you are gonna progress with the relationships, and I know you probably wanna develop them as “realistically” as possible, or at least as realistic as a harem in a superhero-comic Multiverse can be (even though said fictional franchise isn’t necessarily SUPPOSED to be “realistic”), but PLEASE don’t drag it out unnecessarily, at least not for ALL of them.
Not all girls are the same, and not all relationships will progress the same way.
Some might be a bit more nervous, shy, and insecure about love, relationships, and more...intimate things.
But others (like Diana, Zatanna, Poison Ivy, Grail, etc) will be more confident, self-assured, and forward (romantically and sexually) in nature, and won’t be afraid to go to more intimate lengths, and will likely be more sexually prolific.
You should keep that in mind for the future.

Thank you for the read.

I like what your trying to do in broadstrokes however you're characters are very OOC. Beyon their names, pactically all of them have zero semblance to their comic counter parts. Lastly your characters (Naruto in particicular) go on exposition explosions waaaaay too much. It ruins the pace and more importantly, unless they're giving a speech or teachers, NO ONE talks that way.

I get you're trying to build the world and let the characters develop their relations, but information PARAGRAPH dumps are not the way. Use subtlety, body language, jokes, quips, etc.. aka how normal people act. Show dont tell.

Other than that dont listen to me I'm just anon #249.

Loved the story keep up the good work and release another chapter soon

Wow. Who the fuck is Naruto to force Aquaman to join the JL?. Aquaman has a legitimate reason to not join. He’s the King of Atlantis. He’s needed at his home as their king. For Naruto to just demand him like that just to satisfy his own ego is the definition of an immature cocksucker. And real smart to immediately call someone you want to recruit a coward. Great recruitment method. So it’s either Narutos way or no way. Typical whiny bitch. His mother should’ve been raped by Kumo like a breeding fuck slave. Fuck this Naruto fag.

Given the increased mentioning of Earth-2, would you be open to adding Power Girl to the harem?

I have a feeling I know where you’re going with that DNA thing with Darkseid and Naruto’s tooth.
Best guess: you’re gonna have Darkseid clone Naruto with the intention of creating the “ultimate weapon/soldier”, despite the fact that even if Darkseid clones Naruto, it won’t be anywhere near as effective or as dangerous since it lacks the memories, the various skills and training, the improvisational attitude and unbreakable determination, the power of the Tailed Beasts and Six Paths Sage power and power of Kaguya and the power of the Godkiller, etc as all of those are either mental or spiritual/metaphysical or require extensive training and experience or exclusive to the REAL Naruto.
Other alternative guess: Darkseid is gonna want a way to splice the genome of Naruto into his Parademons and standard forces to further empower him, much like how Darkseid used Superman’s DNA to create Doomsday and later create Parademon/Doomsday hybrids known as “Paradooms” in the DCAMU.

I know you’re not exactly comfortable with going beyond the pre-set girls in the harem, whether because you feel you can only handle so much before it becomes “less realistic” or because it screws with the pre-set long-term plans you have for this story, but I still say you should add Power Girl to the harem.
Not only is she powerful and ridiculously hot, but she shares a lot in common with Naruto (both of them are taken to an entirely new Universe after fighting Gods while becoming new accustomed to new places, both are confident and determined even after struggling to live up to the expectations of others, both lost their parents at a young age, etc).
Besides, Power Girl doesn’t really have ANY love life (and no, that one-sided opportunistic sexual-fling with Mister Terrific does NOT count), so Naruto could help her out in those regards.
Plus, the first unspoken “rule/standard” of harem FanFiction is: when possible, you should strive to reserve the best females for the MC.
Not the easiest or most “convenient”, not simply the most underused (although admittedly several like Zatanna, Power Girl, and Grail are heavily underused), but the BEST.
You did well for the most part, but a few like Shay Veritas seem underwhelming, and you excluded other prime picks (like Power Girl or Starfire or apparently Madame Xanadu).

Here’s a friendly word of advice: while I understand and respect the fact that you no doubt already have a lot of stuff pre-planned in regards to relationship development and wanna feature plenty of unique experiences and situations to further develop certain relationships, you also have to understand that not all females are the same and have different interests/personalities and often develop relationships differently than others.
Some might be prudish and can take countless experiences, dates, and years of knowing each other before they entertain the notion of physical intimacy with the guy, and some girls are confident and forward enough to progress to more intimate levels after only a few dates (some claim that it’s the 3rd date that’s the “sex date” at which point the couple is far more open to sexual intimacy), and there are some cases where the relationship starts out as sexual/casual before genuine romance forms rather than the classic other-way-around.
I’m saying since while some (like Supergirl and Mera) might be reluctant to get intimate until after a while of genuine relationship development, other females might be ready after only less than a handful of dates (like Wonder Woman and Zatanna), and others (like Grail) might be extremely forward and flirtatious/teasing that they may get intimate quickly even before genuine romance forms (Grail will likely be among the most sexually forward AND sexually prolific girls in the harem, and even with her darker tendencies, she likely won’t take long to get in Naruto’s pants even if she has to near-rape him).

And now I’m gonna get to the final point of advice to give you.
I thought I would state this for the record for both this story AND all the others.
No matter how tempting it may be, I would strongly recommend, if not outright BEG, that you NOT resort to intimate stuff that is more excessive in nature (using clones in sex, tentacles, Futa She-Male fake-dick BS, etc).
It’s far less satisfying to read and enjoy, it’s reeks of what is classified as “lazy writing”, only really desperate perverts with low standards get off on it, and it’s a very slippery slope that is easily tempting and marks the decline in quality of the writing and the author as a whole.
I know you might claim you would never doing that, but you’d be surprised how often people go back on this claim later on, especially whenever Shadow Clones or Magic is involved.
Just stay AWAY from the excessive stuff for this story and the others, regardless of how large the harem may become or how tempting it seemingly may be.

This does seem like an interesting story with incredible potential, I can’t believe I didn’t find this story sooner.
It’s got an amazing premise, with Naruto likely to make huge waves in the DC Multiverse with his ideals, his powers and skills, experience, and his unique personality.
Will Naruto be acquiring the Rinnegan or Rinne-Sharingan in the future, alongside his normal canon skills/abilities and any additional ones he may have acquired?

I am glad that you are having a harem, as DC is filled with some ridiculously stunning bombshells that outclass even anime females in both the looks and asset size departments.
Although, while I approve of many of the choices (Wonder Woman, Zatanna, Grail, Poison Ivy, and even Mera), others like Shay Veritas (who I’ve never even heard of till I looked her up) and Donna Troy seem a little more questionable.
Also, while I know that Supergirl is admittedly pretty attractive and pretty iconic, I honestly would’ve picked Power Girl over Supergirl if Naruto could only have one instead of both.
She’s both an alien and interdimensional traveller like Naruto, she has a more level-headed yet confident and open-minded personality that’s more compatible with Naruto’s, and she’s easily DC’s most well-endowed female of all time (outclassing even Anime bombshells like Tsunade, or Rangiku Matsumoto from “Bleach”, or Shizuka Marikawa from “Highschool of the Dead”).
Besides, it’s not like she has a serious or successful love life in canon, even in regards to her “relationship” with Mister Terrific (FYI: her “relationship” with Terrific was a completely one-sides, opportunistic, sexual fling that only was a means to an end for her to steal the interdimensional research and technology from Terrific’s company).

If you can’t add Power Girl to the harem, at the very least make Supergirl both older AND considerably more well-endowed.
That’s honestly the best possible alternative for what is quite possibly the biggest blown opportunity for Naruto in this story if you stubbornly INSIST that adding Power Girl is “too much” or “won’t suit the narrative”.
In harem stories, you should ALWAYS aim for the best females as members, rather than just the easiest or most “convenient” or even the most “underused” ones.
Even if it proves to be tricky to incorporate them, they are ALWAYS worth the effort in the end.
PM me back on your feedback if you don’t respond to my review in your next chapter.

I know you personally feel like you’re at your limit of the number of females in the harem, but maybe you should consider adding Nimue to the pairing.
I honestly feel like she’s more than just a loyal friend or a sexually flirtatious “Friends with benefits” situation.
I’m honestly picking up a LOT of Neo/Trinity vibes between Naruto and Nimue (FYI: Neo and Trinity is a reference to “The Matrix” film franchise, in case you don’t recognize it), and the fact is that there could be more to Nimue helping Naruto than just helping out a good person as a loyal friend/ally or enduring the protection/salvation of Earth-0/Earth-Prime and the rest of the Infinite Multiverse.
Hell, what if Nimue’s precognitive capabilities foresaw her and Naruto falling in love, starting a relationship, and maybe even having a family in the FAR future (if you can avoid it, don’t make Naruto a father until near the end or some sort of Epilogue), much like how the Oracle foretold that Trinity would fall in love with Neo?

Maybe I’m Over-analyzing it, but the way Nimue is acting is more than just a friend, and given that this is a harem fanfic and Nimue is the first person in DC that he’s bonded with, there’s no reason to relegate her to the “Friend Zone” or simply have a “friends with benefits” relationship with her, not to simply have a short-lived failed relationship between the 2.
Even Wonder Woman and Mera, who are tied for being close seconds to worming their way into Naruto’s heart, can’t really refute Nimue being with Naruto.

Thanks for the chapter! Finally managed to catch up, and while the whole talking thing did annoy me a bit, I can see why you put it in. That being said, I just wanted to say I really enjoyed reading this fic, and that I hope to see more soon..

Will Naruto have Rinnegan?

Please, please, *please* reduce the the blushing. Blood actually takes time to flow to your face. You don't instantly blush after every halfway romantic sentence or seeing a bit of flesh. There are many other reactions one can show when they are shown affection and support. They can be rendered speechless, they can happily accept it, they can deflect it, they can actively try to run away from it (depending on whether a character is a damaged one) all without blushing.

I just want to stop the blushcrushing before it starts.

I just googled "how to write blushed" and gave a very nice little list

And please wait for friendships to actually kick off before the characters go about complimenting each other willy-nilly. Or telling everybody their life 's fine with Madame Xanadu. Not with everybody else on the team. Especially since Naruto was the only one doing it.

Pace the romance. Make friendships (forged in conflict, strengthened in peace) first, introduce romance second.

Don't forget the contractions: "You are" is usually written as you're and "I am" is I'm

It's a good story and really just needs some care and more length to be great.

Great chapter but I got to ask why would Naruto become a American citizen and could he be based in Japan cause it similar to his home or in another country

please update