Your writing is fantastic. i just wish we could read why Ace was so fearful of shank's. This chapter is beautiful, exciting and so well written. Excellent work.

I really really love this story! Where do I start? Ace and Shanks' relationship? The way you've portrayed the relationship between the Red Hairs and the Spades? Ace and Deuce's bond? The characterization? Everything is wonderful!

please continue

This story is so good.
Would these event alter marineford?
I wonder if ace ha all types of haki before in canon?

Shanks recognizing Ace after their first meeting? Really making sense! Ace looks quite similar to both of his parents. As someone who know both Roger and Rogue surely he can deduce who actually is. This idea is really interesting! Keep it up!

Reading it again for the 3rd time. Hope you update soon!

Is Luffy going to be in the story? He's in the character tags but hasn't had much of a role yet

Thank you for writing this! I truly enjoy reading your story. I never got bored even after I read it again and again. Hope there are more chapters though (_) I just love your idea of making Ace stay and train with Shanks! I have always wanted to see him join a different crew and your story is pure gold! I truly enjoy the interaction between Ace and Shanks (and Buggy). You just write them all so well and it makes me wish that this is canon instead. Because Buggy and Shanks recognizing Ace to be their former Captain's son? There should be a good chance of it happening! I adore how Shanks is taking up the role of being the mentor, father, and big brother all at once! Really hope Ace and the Spades will join Red Force (y)

Shanks and Buggy and how they really care of Ace is just pure gold. I hope to read more! Update please!

I hope Ace joins Shanks...

Love how Shanks has been taking care of Ace. Like his nephew or brother. Its really nice oh how I wish that this is canon I really love this so much!

I love Shanks and Ace's relationship here :) :) :) They just seem so natural together. It's nice to see Shanks train him too. And hooraaaay for Ace not hating Roger anymore! To be honest I think this is much better than having Ace staying with Whitebeard. Love love love this so much! Hope you can update soon lol

Oh my god this is really what I have been looking so far! I always want Ace to join Shanks! Please please please make him join Shanks. I really cannot wait to see Luffy's reactione when he finds out Ace with Shanks _

So I finished reading this after watching Stampede and I think that just made all the feels double. Like I was never over Ace dying but after that and then reading this... I'm just,,, all the Ace feels

Update soon! This is just so sweet.