Excellent story, bro

Ok this this was really sad. Especially the end.

Because it's at the end you realize that all of that venom all of that anger, all of that spite, none of it was actually Yang it was Raven herself it's how she imagines her daughter truly feels after all that's happened. The fact that she herself even if unconsiously recognizes that Summer was a better mother than her and that she believes from the bottom of her heart that Yang hates her completely is what really makes this painful.

Kudos to you.

It's possible to happen, nice fic

Was Yang there at all or was this all in Raven head during her last moments. Kind of sad end for Raven, out of various character is RWBY she seem to be the most redeemable.

This is what happens when you live your life as a hypocrite.

Did not like this a bit at all.

Agree with everything Yang said