Aw, too bad about Mei/Izuku. I much prefer that ship to the other two potential ships in the hinting, though if I had to choose between Momo and Ocha, Ocha gets it hands down. Momo has never been a favorite of mine.

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I honestly think giving Izuku MPD will be a bad thing, especially if he is going to be the next Symbol of Peace. He already has enough distrust issues now. That could completely undermine his dream.

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There are multiple Issues with this whole edgy and neuron erasing excuse of a fanfiction.

1) Thee whole "Izuku's COPY quirk is evil" thing is beyond stupid and retarded. There is no plausible reason for any teenager or adult to even think so. He does not STEAL quirks, neither does he PERMANENTLY ERASE them. He (as you childishly like to state) "perfectly" copy them.

2) Izuku seems to neither have any respect for himself, All Might, or even his girlfriend. He's constantly acting in a self-deprecating manner, because "his quirk is soooo evil". He could have at any point continued to heal All Might with his healing quirk, but chose not to because fuck him I guess. And eventhough he seems to be in a relationship with a very insecure Mei, who has told him multiple times to please stop flirting with other women, Izuku continuously decides to do so.

This all leads me to believe that the author is an edgy 14 year old "whose life is oh so hard, because they're a teenager and everyone's out to get them", and that they have no clue how a healthy relationship works, or how to respect the boundaries of their significant other.

- Edgy/10 would not recommended, due to constant face palming and loss of braincells.

Are u going to give izuku musculars quirk, if so thats awesome, if not thats sad

Love the Midoriya and Endeavour interactions without the usual presence of Shouto. The world building via the computer use and programs was excellent too.

Will this story get continued?

Honestly, I liked this story so far. However i only read up till the 5th chapter, that is most likely the only amount i will read. I just cannot seem to get over izuku's canon like character/behaviour and how "villainous" his quirk is to the interpretation of pretty much all the characters, except the ones he is friends with. I dislike how the characters do not seem real and are programmed with hateful first impressions and rumours being the truth when he has clearly not done anything villain like at all. Then again this is not my story and i have never written before, so this is all just my opinion and hopefully is considered as constructive criticism

I feel like Izuku has kind of a persecution complex here or something. Or rather, such a thing is written into the world itself in some way. There's nothing in particular about his quirk which is inherently villainess, and indeed many people should be lauding him as the next great hero. seems a little strange, not only that people judge him negatively for his quirk , but also that they get treated in return like they've just made some extremely harsh judgment and they're racist or something.

if everybody in the world has one superpower , I don't think that thinking privately to yourself that you should be careful about letting a power duplicator touch you is unreasonable in any way. But Momo briefly thought that she should consider whether or not she should allow Izuku to touch her and copy her power, and she immediately got a frown and judgment from him for being a snob.

Izuku's power is a little out there, and also heinously insanely strong, but the only reason people look down on him for it seems to be some kind of inertia from Canon to make writing him easier. So this guy is simultaneously persecuted for no reason, and also extremely sensitive about it in a way that makes no sense.

I’m curious why give one for all to ochako mirio would be a great candidate still and his own quirk could be effective to fight and push deku even further as a hero plus could spark a better rivalry than the one with katski

i really hope u dont or havent yet gone the Split Personality disorder i have an extreme dislike for split personality MC's so i would be forced to drop this story :(

You seriously need to reword this Female muscles develop differantly to males

[She had a 6 pack to match his and visible muscles on her arms and legs. She wasn't overly muscular but definitely was the most bulky of the girls now.]

A sixpack on females is not only not good to look at(unless you like females that have male muscle qualitys) it is unhealthy, females unlike males have to keep above a certain % of bodyfat or risk damaging their menstrul cycle, the process for a female to get and keep a six pack tip toes this line and is one of the dumbest things she could do if she wants children in the future

hm so he can only get one Quirk even from someone that has multiple, Super regeneration was not the Nomus base Quirk. as All For One has multiple copys of it so if someone has multiple quirks he doesnt nessacerily get the original one because if he also got it's shock absorbtion it wouldnt have been able to injure him

More chapter please... It's pretty good!

Uraraka can hold like 3 tons at a time. Nomu doesn't weigh anywhere near that amount. Also this chapter brings up a huge ass flaw with the character you are trying to have Izuku be. Izuku is basically just half assing it at all times, he criticizes Todoroki for not using his fire half but Izuku could, at any time, copy Todoroki's quirk and use fire and ice to save his friends. Izuku almost let his friends die because he doesn't want to be seen as "villainous". And that is the markings of a failure of a hero.

How did Bakugo rank higher than Izuku? In the tests you showed Izuku beat Bakugo twice, in both the long throw and grip strength and Bakugo only beat Izuku once, in the race. Also, goddamnit Izuku's quirk isn't brain washing or power theft it's the most OP power to ever exist and it is weird that no one acknowledges that and everyone is too busy going "oh hey that kid is evil"