Reviews for Clockwork Little Madness |
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![]() ![]() Things have taken a turn for the worst. Swinton's days in office are numbered, as she caused this to happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah! We're in the endgame now! |
![]() ![]() Slothfeld AND Doug both dead...but Alysaa can be saved. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yikes. Justice and retribution indeed. Seems Sedor is back in play now that she's been cured, and Skye and Alyssa are out. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And so it seems we're drawing near to the end, and the battle of city hall. |
![]() ![]() Dr. Wilde's resolve. |
![]() ![]() Starlight on the move. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Some good action going on there. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() They pull through no matter what! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very tense to begin with, with a lot of deescalation going on. I have to empathise with poor Skye here, it is unfair... great job writing her anger there. And yikes, just when we thought it was over, wooosh! Ramses steps on again. Yikes! Back to high stakes. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() The sky falls on Slothfeld! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yikes! Dammit, lots emotions. Fun to see Skye so cathartically mad about everything, but damn did Slothfield play her at the end there. Fingers crossed that she doesn't give in and make a major mistake. |
![]() ![]() Is "Fdsfdsfdsdfdf" a line-break? |
![]() ![]() "nothing do to with what's going on now"? Don't you mean "nothing to do with what's going on now" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yikes, we're in the endgame now. The horns are locked together as the two spin down into chaos. Tense and unnerving, good job. |