Late to see the update. Kinda gave up a little thinking maybe it was dropped, but I'm happy to be wrong. Thanks for the chapter.

Excellent chapter. Please continue.

Love your story keep it up :)

:-).

More please!

Enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!

I feel like the theme of all young Asari should be Girls Just Wanna Have Fun by Cyndi Lauper. It fits them perfectly.

I love the story so far keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice.

awes0me

Great chapter interesting fic

Zaeed not Zaheed. Otherwise like the story

awesome work great character

Look up the Star Trek Federation logo or just the UN one, then do the same for new (2001) Battlestar Galactica logo that every battlestar has on their backs.
Combine the two and you can perverse the Cerberus logo, while letting it still be there.
I mean, changing the meaning of the symbols to something else...
See TIMmy rage in anger.
What, it still is a white C?

ME1 has almost unending ammo, 1000 shots per ammo clip, atleast.
Build in heat sink as well.
Its the ME2 and ME3 ones that introduced those crappy clips and so on.

Suggest you steal some stuff from Andromeda, like that Asari Sword.
There is a sniper rifle in all games, that you can use as a assault rifle.
That thus lowers a weapon slot.
Drop the pistol and grap two SMGs for duel wielding.
Then figure out if you still want a shotgun in the small of your back.

As for armors, if you use the Adromeda styles, then I consider the full armored armors to be military and those that are more spacesuits with armor on the important places as the torso, civillian armors.
The fun thing to wear, dump the suit of a civillian one, so you can put its armor parts on top of a military one for extra protection.
Would need a XL or XXL civillian armor, though, but its focus on shields should also be greater.
Modify till its one.

Suggest you take a good look at the SR1, SR2 and the Tempest.
Especially the later two, since only the engineerings deck consoles and the staircases are important of the SR1.
Take a good look at the Tempest, its top deck around that research station, could easily be slooted behind the loft, lets you remove the SR2 its com room for that elevator shaft, thus freeing up room for a corridor to the CIC with two SR1 staircases upwards.
Ad the Tempest engineering to the SR2 one, for a third deck, use the SR1 its engineerings deck consoles for it and instal the Temoest hangar elevator as way to travel between the SR2 top engineerings deck and the new trird deck.
Increase the wing sizefor the resulting larger hull and use the Tempest wing setup for the inner wing, giving you six STL engines.
Widen the neck and put the Tempest cockpit between the neck and the SR2 cockpit.
Use Tempest airlock setup, with nearby wc, Joker thanks you.
Find a place to put a staircase downwards, so you can ad the Tempest captains room beneed the cockpit.
Put the warroom beneed the Tempest com room, with that ME3 SR2 com room behind it.
Then modify the Tempest com room so all chairs and the table can retract into the floor and that place can act as a mini Acturus station holodeck.
And give the ME2 SR2 lab a good airlock with only one way in or out.
Use the ME2 shuttle storage locations, with the ME3 setup, gives four extra shuttles or hovertanks to use.

Garrus is standing right below the CIC, the canons mounting point is the foundation of the Galaxy map display system.
Yet Garrus is the same amount of steos from the elevator as Joker is, nor did we ever see the torpdo storage and launching room.
Something funny is going on with that elevator shaft.

ME2 SR2, eight shuttle storage places, crew has beds, but enough sleeping tubes for those shuttles thrir strike teams.
Two relaxation rooms, most likely for the same reason, yet no place to train.
The Captains Lift is apart from everybody else, did Cerberus try to isolate Shepard from the ship its crew?
If so, then that place was originally mend to be a gun range or so, something to let those strike teams train a bit.
That fish tank is most likely there to hide TIMmy his spy stuff more easily as well.

Combine the Grissly with the Nomad, then ad the ME2 hovertank its liviting wheels to it, should have room for four of them.
That should thus give a nice heavy hovertank.