so i just finished reading the third chapter and read the author note and you said 'that you were playing breath of the wild and avoiding homework like the plague' and for that last I am going to favorite and follow you

The height is a bit weird, considering he was 5'5" at the start of the series.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! This was so good! Why abandon it like this!? I am deeply saddened. :(

This "Trash" as you put it is followed by so many people because they see a story evolving and your writing isn't that bad. I've read a lot of stories and while I'm not gonna lie and say that your writing is the best its not even close to the worst that I've read. I can respect your views however and while I don't agree with you 'Abandoning the story for a while' I'm not gonna force you to write (mainly because I'm REALY stubborn and will and have never taken well to people forcing me to do things). I do empathize with school as I'm there to.

- SonOfThanatos11

Okay, so izuku is 6'7" now...when his cannon height is 5'5"... not a particular fan of that, but alright I guess

it's followed because this trash is goood...
I need mooorrreeee

Keep up the good work

This is only the first chapter, so maybe the issues I noticed are things that have gotten better in later chapters. However, in this chapter I have noticed quite a few mistakes. These include:

-Incredibly rushed pace. Seems more of a draft than a finished chapter.
-Run on sentences.
-Poor punctuation.
-Incorrect word usage/nonsensical sentences. "With power, can, can one become a hero? No, I think not." makes absolutely no sense due to the word "with" being used instead of "without", "with no powers", etc. Another example is "Midoriya thinks to himself as he starts walking under a tunnel." You walk through a tunnel, not under it.
-Missing letters. "And to answer your question, a pro hero always risk their life" should have an "s" at the end of "risk".
-Sentences that do not fit in a third person perspective. "... Someone believes in him" as a on its own, with nothing showing it is being thought by someone vs. " "Someone believes in me," thought Midoriya."
-Wording that sounds odd in the third person point of view. "Izuku was seen walking through a street" shows this and improper word use. You walk down a street, and through something like a parking lot. "Izuku began walking down the street" sounds better.
-Changes between tense in the same sentence. In general I would also recommend using third person past tense, as even when grammatically correct, reading third person present tense (which most of this chapter is) just feels odd.

An example of many of the issues I have noticed are shown in the sentence: "As Midoriya thought to himself he didn't know that there was a sludge villain coming out of the manhole cover until it speaked."

1. Here you switched from present tense to (presumed) past tense due to using "speaked".
2. Speaked is not actually a word, as the past tense of speak is spoke or spake, although spake is only archaically used.
3. The portion about the person being a sludge villain does not make sense to point out in a sentence stating that Izuku has not noticed someone. It would make more sense to include this in the next portion where you show what the sludge villain is saying.
4. Using "out of THE manhole cover" places an emphasis on the manhole cover that makes it seem as if it had already been mentioned. The only thing mentioned about what was around Izuku before this was the tunnel mentioned previously.

So with some changes in the wording, I would recommend this sentence to be something along the lines of: "Midoriya, lost in thought, didn't realize someone had climbed out of a nearby manhole until they had begun speaking."

Hopefully this can be of some assisting when it comes to writing your future chapters/stories. I would recommend taking some extra time to review your chapters before posting, or see if you can find someone to act as a Beta.

I AM HERE...again, REALLY love this story. I think All-Might should ask Deli to talk with Nobody so he can give Deku One for All and make him even more over powered(All for One is SO screwed either way). Also if you didn't get it in my last comment keep Himiko OUT of the group that crushes on Deku.

Okay, you lost me with the utter ridiculousness of a fifteen year old being able to adopt a child. There's no way anyone would consider that possible, as he's still a dependent himself... Not to mention no responsible human being would leave a fifteen year old in charge of a child long-term. Not just for the child's sake, either, as being trust into that would seriously fuck up the teenager, too.

First off Himiko scares me, I'll be completely honest about that. Second, Deku needs a mask just give a cool shadowy little mask, like Nightwing has. One more thing... KEEP ANY AND ALL ADULTS OUT OF THE CRUSHING ON DEKU GROUP ADULTS IN THERE IS JUST WRONG! x (insert infinity symbol)

(contemplating how many reviews on the same fic he's posted in one day) OH! I would to say that I also would have preferred Deku be Eri's sister and I think Nobody should eventually tell Deku that when he finally reaches stage four he will permanently be able to break the fourth wall(grins like a mastermind)

NO that notebook was an incredible asset! Also why wasn't Delivered such a master of analysis heck he could be a devastating villain with an ability like that also, TSU SHOULD BE IN THE GROUP OF PEOPLE THAT WITH DEKU!

WHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! (weeps uncontrollably like cannon Deku) Also I like fanfictions for either sweet vengeance (I'm not evil) or some SHIPPING!(I'm a MAJOR shipper).

4th Wall breaking is great, besides no one in the anime can do that, also can you have one of those times where a character sneezes when someone is talking about them?