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Nice story, although Peter losing his memories seems like an unnecessary gut punch.

thank you for this story that shows how a small change starts something big

It's well written and it was what I read for a whole day

it let me rest too

some bits I wish were a bit longer but otherwise I wouldn't wish them to be shorter so win

And I'd say all all character interactions are spot on

tdlr: beautiful written, great character portraying and good story line

I would love if there was a part 2!

This fic was just absolutely fantastic.

Just wanted to drop a note and tell you how much I enjoyed your story.
I really enjoyed it and think you did an excellent job with writing it.
MJ as a Sorceress is the perfect partner for Peter and lets them both live in each others worlds.
Hope you decide to do something else in this same storyline.
Thank you again for a very enjoyable read.
Brian

Such a wonderful story! Great job!

Didn't see that coming! Do good! His gift from MJ made that chapter!

This is one of my favourite (if not, my actual favourite) story I’ve ever read. This was just fantastic, the concepts were brilliant, characterisation was perfect and added depth to the parts already established in the mcu and fitted MJ into the story just amazingly. Thanks for writing this really helped me through the day. :)

Hi, author. Thank you so much for you efforts and your dedication at writting.
I really liked your work, the way people interacted and how you explained them while keeping some things hidden was very good.
I must say, I specially liked the way you didn't try to drag MJ into absolutelly every scene to give her more protagonism, respecting the spaces that all the other characteres were meant to have was very apreciated. Like, that scene after Vormir? Nice
You anaged to drag me into a very interesting place that was different while keeping it's escence.
I loved your Peter, cause I could see him through the eyes of someone who thought him as innocent and cute but also respected him deeply, something I feel not everyone quite catches, sometimes it feels like they try to make him a "human overeager puppy", but you did not such a thing and I enjoyed that a lot.
Also? The whole mentorship, bith Stark-Peter and Strange MJ was nice on it's differences and that you added some more character profundity into Wong, explained May and Ned a bit more was satisfactory. Yes. Much apreciated.
Thank you

What an amazingly well written story. Thank you very much for writing this.

Your story kept me riveted from the first. You are a great writer.

Thank you.

First found and read this series on Archive of Our Own, which I don't have an account on, shortly before you wrote the fourth part, and had been checking for updates since. It was after I read the final chapter that I noticed you wrote it on this site as well, and I'm now rereading and reviewing it.

Amazing story! I've really enjoyed reading it! Very well written, and I've loved the way you developed Michelle's character over the course of this story. Especially how, as opposed to quickly becoming a hero like a lot of fanfic writers would do it, she slowly went through her 'hero's journey' from just wanting to learn magic for fun while avoiding any danger, to wanting to look out for her friends, to slowly warming up to taking on more responsibility, to backing out of the fight against Thanos, to feeling guilty for not doing more and wanting to redeem herself and bring everyone back.

Loved the way you depicted her journey as a student and later Master of the Mystic Arts. Enjoyed the way she got herself involved, though I agree with her that it was creepy of Stephen and the Ancient One to use the Time Stone that way. Liked how her relationships with Stephen and Wong developed, and how they taught and helped her so much. Was happy with how becoming a Sorceress made her finally feel like she had a purpose in life. Enjoyed her times at Kamar-Taj (was also amused by Peter's reaction to her comments about being friends with a reformed murderer). Was interested by the arc with Mordo attacking her, and liked how, with Peter and Stephen's help, she managed to overcome him, and also how she got the Vaulting Boots of Valtorr after. Also liked how she made that bracelet for Peter and how it successfully stopped him from dying during the Decimation. Also really enjoyed her duel with the Ancient One; that certainly would've been exciting to watch. This story kind of made me wish that MJ would become a Sorceress in canon, even if the events would be different, due to how much I enjoyed this concept.

Also enjoyed the way you developed MJ's relationship with Peter. I thought it was done really well. Enjoyed the way you slowly had them go from being friends, to sort of boyfriend and girlfriend, to being more serious later on. Also liked how they made a really good team, both as their civilian identities and their superhero counterparts. Felt bad for them in the final chapter when it turned out Peter didn't remember the original future, though there was hope for them by the end.

Truly phenomenal story! Great job with it! I enjoyed MJ in Spider-Man: Homecoming and I'm looking forward to seeing what they do with her in Spider-Man: Far From Home, and I loved what you did with her here. This seems like a good stopping point if that's what you're planning, though if you do write more for this (hoping her parents get better in it), I would like to read that. Also excited for your next story! :)

This was a great chapter. Even without much plot it manages to keep up with the other chapters in tension and interest and I love the direction it’s heading

Only stop a single bullet my ass