I am certainly enjoying the story so far, but I have to ask: Does Dumbledore have a Fish Tank of Death? Cause the way it is described it sounds like a Fish Tank of Death. Like a Veil of Death, but... fishier.

I’m also super confused because you said in an author note you like to write f/h but I don’t see that you’ve posted very much here so if you have any other places to read your awesome writing I’d love to know about it because dang...this is good.

I am really enjoying this story!

To be honest this has to be one of the worst gamer novels not because the story itself is bad but due to the fact that it has little to no gamer elements its like reading a horror story with small amount of horror

I've lost interest in the potential incest the stupidity of harry.

I'll start with I'm enjoying this very much. I generally don't read incomplete stories as I'm just not patient enough. I like the use of Andromeda as she's not seen very much in the stories I've read. Nymphadora is certainly more manic and immature than I usually see her but again, that's just a fresh take on the character. Still easily believable and doesn't distract from the reading. Sirius is also a little more "deeper" as a character than I usually see. Your version isn't an unrepentant man-child. He is actually trying to be an adult. Again, I like it. I do miss Hermione. Both in "screen time" and the interactions with all the characters.

Thank you for your work and KEEP GOING! Please do not abandon this story. FAR too many good stories are never completed and that is extremely frustrating to a serial reader like myself.

Mr. Weasley's car is a Ford Anglia not Angelina. The Anglia was a UK only car and I think a lot of American writers get this wrong. That or it's autocorrect.

When do you fix harry of his stupidity?

Why in all most every gamer story they tell everybody

You have Qui... Fanatic twice in Rons traits. 3 Fun story so far!

Interesting to see how things came to be this time, Karkaroff, Cho's stupid dad

I'm curious how Harry responds to the Veela and how he does playing against Krum

Surprised they didn't Imperius Sirius or put him under a compulsion, I can only presume that he saw Crouch Jr

Your story does a great job emphasizing what a kid this Harry is and how much of a twat he can appear to be

He decides to go into the thick of danger himself but doesn't inform anybody like the Weasleys or Hermione to be on their guard?

Then jumps into danger just him and Sirius and Remus while getting distracted by kisses from Cho?

He doesn't actually prepare sufficiently for the duel and takes it easy, only to be surprised that Draco is actually strong now when he knows Malfoy is cheating?

Honestly, total kid

Not saying bad writing, he's totally in character

Also he has a fucking Hallow and is told these are gifts from death (The game master he is terrified of), and yet he never bothered to dig deeper to recognize his invisibility cloak is the Peverell cloak? Amateur hour yo

Not gonna lie, I thought harry would reveal each other's secret dalliances and ruin their marriage as well as bringing Vernon's attention to Petunia stealing the money for taking care of Harry

Reads draco's entry
O.o hooolllll up