Reviews for A Little Too Much Of A Good Thing
Kraven the Hunter chapter 25 . 6h
I swear you're referencing some video game or something with where the asshole ended up, but I can't for the life of me figure it out.

Was the Ball getting ripped to shreds satisfying? (Shakes "magic" 8-ball) Yes. Definitely.

The rest is silence, and loads of PTSD. (Seriously, Sugar had the right idea with that being a plot point in SUF)

Well, goodbye. (I know you said you might return to Gravity Falls at some point, but I think we might be bad at each other. You love putting Dipper and Mabel through the wringer, and for some reason I get way too invested in their well-being.)
Mr. Nobody chapter 25 . 7/20
I’ll be honest, the only reason I read fanfics is because of your stories, mate. I do hope you have another Gravity Falls fan fiction planned out so you can finally shed some light on who Emma Smith’s bodyguard is. Nonetheless, this was a great story just like your previous ones. Kind of sad to see this one go, but all things come to an end. I’ll be waiting patiently for your next story. Until then, cheers mate.
Frosty Wolf chapter 25 . 7/20
And so we come to the end of a most satisfying tale. I really like how you wrapped everything up, Grey is neutralized, 8-Ball was cut off and then turned on by the other Henchmaniacs, Dipper and Pacifica get together, and ultimately things work out.

I'm very surprised that 8-Ball got cut off by a reincarnated Bill Cipher though, even more so that he's apparently Dipper and Mable's baby brother. Older Dipper mentioned seeing scarier things than Weirdmagedon though, was that a reference to a future story?

Grey freaking out over the bee's was funny. Was the woman in the plague mask your character or just someone random?
a very angry ravage chapter 25 . 7/20
thanks for your great stories
durrendurrendol1993 chapter 25 . 7/20
It was an incredible story
Guest chapter 25 . 7/20
Good end
Blind-Eyephone chapter 25 . 7/20
Ahhh I’m gonna miss getting notifications for this fic :0
skywalkerchick1138 chapter 24 . 7/12
Oh man, he got cancelled real good. I can only imagine what the callout posts and memes on Interdimensional Tumblr and Interdimensional Twitter looked like. Also, I’m morbidly curious about the Amontillado reference. Like, Grey didn’t just name himself after the character, he literally is Montressor? He literally did brick in Fortunato? So, how did an Italian nobleman become an interdimensional mercenary, and why mesh a Poe story into this one?
a very angry ravage chapter 24 . 7/11
another great story coming to its end. will you continue to do Gravity Falls fanfics?
Blind-Eyephone chapter 24 . 7/11
That was a satisfying chapter.
Frosty Wolf chapter 24 . 7/11
And the new queen wakes up just in time for her destruction, nice! It may not have been the same queen that tormented Mabel but we saw enough of it's attitude to justify it's destruction in my opinion.

I also like how Grey got cut loose by his own people, but I guess even they draw a line when their operatives actions could come back and haunt them and the possibility of an interdimensional Forger Wasp Empire definitely counts. I get the feeling that his final destination will be more than a little unpleasant, but I guess we'll find out in the epilogue.

As for the epilogue, I'm guessing we'll see a long overdue conversation with Dipper and Pacifica and 8-Ball getting cut off, which will probably tick off the rest of the Henchmaniacs.

Overall another great chapter! Looking forward to the final chapter!
Kraven the Hunter chapter 24 . 7/11
Horrifying point: you never really addressed what if anything happened with any pregnant women who were infected. You remembered the people who were on life support but you missed that one.

Darn it, why can't I just enjoy the happy ending? What's wrong with me?
Guest chapter 24 . 7/11
the punishment was fair
Kraven the Hunter chapter 23 . 6/10
Oh thank goodness. My inner pessimist thought it might be a case of where their minds are going to be restored but they're going to be stuck looking like Mabel forever.

That's the way: either find a way to get it to rain antidote or vaporize it so they'll all inhale it.

As for you, Queenie, (and I'm going off here because she's already dead) I might spare you depending on how you answer me one question: "When your drones were attacking people, did any of them beg you for mercy?" (Pause) That's what I thought. (Especially SLOW injection)

And as for Greyman, look for the drabble to come.
Til isPUMPKIN chapter 23 . 6/10
What are they gonna do?

whatever it is he will deserve it

That... was super smart. Like, very smart.
When you finish this fanfic, are you going to write another one? Cause you’re a great writer, and I want more fics. ;-;

Also: yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes everyone will be back YES
In response to your coded question, no not really, I only theorize about the most EXTREME cliffhangers, like *heavy breathing * the one where the Grey guy was IN THE DOORWAY-
*breathes*
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