Your Feedback/Grading for Assignment #7

Examiner: Bex

Grade: 20/20 - O (Outstanding)

Feedback: "Well. Fuck you for that last line. How dare. I really liked the characterisation of James, particularly at the beginning. It's adorable. The descriptions are minimal but enough to set the scene. The character interaction is minimal, but again, the bit that there is is really well written. I like that, even in a fic so short, you managed to give it your own stamp. I liked the way you split it up, and I loved the beginning and the way you set the tone for the story. The flow is good, the line breaks are placed well, and the balance of the fic is good. You used the prompt in the background, but it was definitely present and helped to set the scene of the fic. Plot is simple but both sweet and awful because that last line. I liked the simplicity of it, I think you really made it work in this. I liked the mini sections too, I thought they tied together well. Sure if you like fluff then having your heart ripped out. (why are so many of us like this?) SPaG was on point. Prompt was present and you were within word count."

So sweet! Loved the Black Panther reference, lol! And also the bit about it being too soon but James doesn't care because he just knows, ugh. Love it love it love it. Lovely drabble!

hahahahahah so I saw jily and i was like YAS and ah I loved it, especially the first two scenes, but the last sentence makes me want to cry so yay.
but actually this was great :)
sarah x