Lol wtf

write died or what ? lol

Plz update

this story is amazing... please.. continue it.. pleaseeeee!

I'm sure this story is dead. but on the off chance it's not. I liked the premise of the story. The grammatical errors sometimes makes parts hard to read but overall it's good. Hope you or somebody else finishes this because it have alot of potential.

WHY IS THIS GLORIOUS FIC NOT UPDATED?

It’s a really interesting plot premise. Can’t wait for the next update

This is interesting, obviously an AU and not canon-compliant, but interesting nonetheless. A bit rough around the edges with grammar, but it's not enough to detract. Though I admit, the western style writing did have me question if I should keep reading.

I can already see the complicated relationships. Miura may find 8-man a kindred spirit, and next chapter will decide how he sees her. Then there's him and Yukino, and later Miura and her. It's all very interesting.

I want to see where you go with this, so do try to update soon.

nice story. i totally ship queen bee to loner boy.

What a wicked theory of Hikio name. XD

That was intense, both Miura's and Hikio's relevation in this chapter. I can't wait to see what will Hachiman do about it.

Otro capitulo bastante bueno. Me ha encantado al igual que el otro que publicaste, ahora quedará en ver que sucede con esos dos de allí en adelante con esa extraña relación.

Yeah... I think I am going to leave this one out of my fics to read.

Don't get me wrong. Your writing is quite alright, but considering that everything has happened in the spam of a single day makes it so fantastical to the point that I was wondering why none of you characters has already suffered a heart attack with that much emotional stimulation throughout these 8 chapters.

It's just so... overwhelming and particularly not realistic like an oregairu fic should carry itself on.

Creo que hay un pequeño error en el que Miura tenga su móvil, si no recuerdo mal en el cap 4 lo dejaron en la escuela aparte de eso me gusta la historia no se sobre esfuerze

Your local terms are really jarring to read coming from Japanese teens. Seeing Miura say "shite" is completely unnatural. Especially when added in near her saying things line "Ahh, mou!"