Love this story!

Oh man I can’t wait see how this plays out lol

Great chapter toren, keep it up! LOL Nick actually lives at Mystic Springs! He seriously lives there no wonder he needed to talk to Yak, he owns the place if I remember right. Obviously Judy's less than thrilled with this latest development given what happened when they were last here. Wonder what's gonna happen and where exactly does Nick live within the place? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great story so far toren, keep it up! Sounds like both Nick and Judy are havin some rather romantic and intimate thoughts about each other. I can tell that at least Judy doesn't realize the underlying feelings she has for Nick but with how Nick reacted with his thought about Judy I can tell he does realize how he might feel and it scares him based on how he reacted. I wonder what Nick needs Yax for though? Maybe once Judy's better he wants to take her back to Mystic Springs for a massage or somethin? If that's Nick's plan I'm not so sure she's gonna like it based on their last visit. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Good story so far, but get rid of the stupid and idiotic line of him taking out a cigarette. Nick would never do that and if you don’t remove it then you have just lost a reader and I will be telling on my friends to not bother reading this either. In this day there is no reason at all to have Nick smoking cancer sticks.

Well then a second chapter down and a very l.a noir nick lol nice touch

this is getting good, I wonder what's gonna happen next at the mystic springs?

More please

I'm curious to where this can go. Also love secrets

alright you have my intrest

This has the potential to be a great story, as long as you don't follow the negative (and incorrect) tropes about Nick this fandom insists on following.

From what I’m seeing you have his personality mostly spot on, which is rare, so great job on that. :)