yo kll...chappies getting really spicy... can't help but feel like this is the prelude for what to come... keep up the good work...

Luma out

Umm... kll? its luma here... not very good at this reviewing stuff tho, i'll just drop a review anyway... welp.. that is my review

This is the first fix that I have read that takes place after the Naruto. I know they do exist but I’ve been avoiding them thinking they would be bad. You have increased my faith in these kinds of fics. I’m looking forward to where this will go. I might also read other fics that take place after Naruto.

Well Done! Deeply anticipating next chapter.

Kakuzu

shoulda used Jingou

Short and sweet, cant wait for more.

Daaam, that just some crazy re zero shit. Still kinda sad that he's marked as missing nin

Ahhh dam, this is gold

Okay this was a pretty damn good chapter

what i meant was I dont like those 1st pov because I'm trying read about mc and not i or me because it sounds im the mc which im not

i HATE 1st pov... I'm trying to read about that those use I or me like its about a person not me or certainty not i... i dont know, it could've been good but i dont read after that 3rd to 1st change. but Good luck to you author on your endeavor peace

Great chapter! There's always so many little details you pay attention to when you write. The way he controls air when going fast, the near death seizure, the extra water he has from drinking... nice job!

I was expecting him to start working as a ninja somewhere and taking missions. I wasn't expecting him to start attacking Konoha shinobi to try to get Kumo a leg up in a war that's no longer his business. Jumping into the crosshairs for no good reason. Kumo are the only enemy ninja at this time. Couldn't even bother to level up first.

What's up with kabato? A falling out humm that is going to be a interesting angle.