This story was very well written and I loved it! Are you thinking of just keeping this a one shot or making it a multi-chapter story? I hope you continue with it!

This was a great story. I really enjoyed it. You portray the characters really well. Keep up the good work!

Enjoyed reading this a lot! This fic has a lot of my favorite tropes and themes (hurt/comfort, holding another person, trauma aftermath…). :D

Two thoughts:

a) Please keep posting on AO3 as well! I love that site and it's so much easier to comment there (it actually keeps me logged in all the time - and conversations are handled much better).

b) Would you like any assistance with SPAG? (spelling, punctuation, and grammar) Computers only can do so much and they're not super helpful with the fine nuances of capitalization and grammar, and useless when it comes to homonyms… (And I'm a walking proofreader - can't help but spot every error everywhere, lol.) I'd be happy to look over a Google doc, for instance, and suggest edits that would fix those kinds of errors. Your writing underneath all of it is good, it's just minor errors that make it look less than the quality it really is. (I don't offer this to very many people because it can take a lot of work if the writing isn't that good.)

If you want to, the easiest way to do this is to find my e-mail address on my AO3 profile (same nick as here) and e-mail me a link to a document that you've set to "anyone with the link can comment". Then I can suggest edits and comment as to why I recommend them, and you can approve them if you agree.

*claps* great story! I love the way OA and Maggie are portrayed in a way they're really close but at the same time not lovers (which kinda annoys me when people write a fic where they date).

The level of detail was just... WOW! Setting portrayed wonderfully, solid 10 out of 10!