Reviews for Flames of Duty
Elizabeth loines chapter 7 . 7/19
Pls update
notvisiulebliss chapter 7 . 6/21
Dude keep this going don't stop
AJGuardian chapter 6 . 6/10
Aaah. I see a guest reviewer missing the point as to who the villain is.

Woooosh much? Neither of them are "Villains".
Is a soldier a villain just because he/she is doing their duty by killing combatants?
Is a Soldier a villain because they do their duty and follow orders?
Yama is not a villain in this story and neither is Minato. They are just adversaries. Yama has a duty to a MUCH higher power. Minato just doesn't have the eyes to see that his actions harm his world.
The cycle of rebirth in this universe is real and the story follows this reality. If imbalance happenes then chaos can ensue (it is inferred).

The research devision from Bleach killed a lot of Plus Souls in the anime (can't remember what episode or story arc this was) when many people died in the world of the living to maintain the balance. It would seem like it's villainous, but is it REALLY? They have a duty to maintain the balance. Plus Souls who die are reborn later anyway. Thus the natural balance continues.

Here Yama is correcting the imbalance by ending those that were revived by unatural means. Not that any revival of this sort is natural to begin with.

I just can't help but shake my head.

Also...I hooe the Author is doing well.

You aint dead yet, right?
AJGuardian chapter 7 . 6/10
Well. The Sound 4 had titles to their named like Tayuya.

She was known as "Tayuya of the North Gate". The sound 4 is just a colloquial name for all the 4 combined.

And I agree with you in the use of Yamamoto's Bankai.
lara5170 chapter 7 . 5/4
This is interesting but is it still being continued? I am hoping so because I am looking forward to reading more.
Edward chapter 7 . 4/21
please continue because this story is very good
Xbox guest chapter 7 . 4/11
Was a good read
DarkChaosDragon00 chapter 7 . 3/29
update please
Guest chapter 1 . 3/10
Ah nope, can't read this which is a bummer really because the premise seemed to be interesting.

But there are just some points that I cannot handle.

One is turning Minato into the "villain", c'mon leave the guy alone, Minato just doesn't make for a convincing bad guy since it goes completely against his personality.

Secondly and most importantly, why did you have to make me sympathise with Konoha if you are going to have Naruto slaughter everyone as if they were pigs? Now I can only see Naruto as the bad guy and I actually want Minato to win in the end...Bad for the balance (bullshit) or not.
mastercheif1229 chapter 7 . 3/1
Great story so far! I hope that you continue it at some point!
SapphireAsashi chapter 2 . 2/8
Still the same slow and do nothing mook I see.
TheAussieRogue chapter 7 . 1/16
Love the story man. And hope you update this soon.
jabbarulez chapter 7 . 12/10/2019
Interesting. All I can say is BURN BABY BURN!
Nox733 chapter 7 . 12/5/2019
Love this story premise. It's probably in my top five Naruto bleach cross-overs. Can't wait to read what you have planned.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/2/2019
This is an excellent story! I hope to see a lot more! Plus it all makes perfect sense from the Bleach standpoint including his mission. Not only will Minato's plans cause problems with the cycle of rebirth, but as you've opened up in this chapter's ending, the reincarnated are technically PLUS which means they will start attracting Hollows, VERY BAD for the Ninja since even low-class hollows can destroy platoons of ninja considering their Cero alone can wipe out a quarter of a village at least, and that's not taking into account their special abilities, Hell, Shrieker could probably take on Deidara with his explosives!

Also Retsu being Haku made ABSOLUTE sense, because that was my first impression seeing Retsu (Holy shit it's a grown Haku!) though she could also be a reborn Mikoto Uchiha now that they've shown more of Mikoto's personality. However when she went Kenpachi on Zaraki's ass I thoughh (It's fucking Zabuza!), so yeah, made a LOT of sense with what you did.

Also totally agree with the fact Naruto would use his Bankai on Sasori just as a simple "Fuck You", Yamamoto is dutiful, he is not emotionless as you've pointed out, the only reason he didn't unleash his Bankai on Aizen was because of the presence of his own comrades. Guarantee if they were in some sort of one-on-one battle with no one nearby, Yamamoto would have utterly destroyed Aizen for all he did to people, Hell, his fight with Ywach proves how dearly he regards his comrades, so yeah, not hard to imagine him being UBER pissed at Sasori for not only killing his former comrades, but defiling their bodies and forcing Naruto to have to kill them again... two times over at that! Even if Naruto never got to fall in love with Hinata, he would still see her as an innocent victim.

Also, I hope that Obito and Madara (if you have the other brought back) both face a pissed off NaruYama, considering if it wasn't for them, NONE of this would have happened, Kushina wouldn't have died in the first place forcing Minato to play god, and quite honestly... I FUCKING HATE OBITO! Always did, even when he was "good" because if it wasn't for his fucking stupidity, Kakashi wouldn't have been turned into a shell of himself and really, none of this shit would have happened. Yeah, Naruto goofed off, but Naruto grew up in a time of peace while Obito was in a fucking war and couldn't pull his head out of his ass! Lastly, Obito MURDERED Naruto's family for what?! To live on with an IMAGINARY GIRLFRIEND of a girl who NEVER FUCKING LIKED HIM! Talk about a goddamned loser! Kishimoto is the BOSS of creating lame-ass pussies as villains... Obito wants and imaginary girlfriend... Itachi murdered his own family because an OLD GEEZER threatened him... Sasuke won't grow the fuck up and see he's not the only one suffering... and Madara's pissed because Hashirama rightfully owned his ass! Yeah Kishi did a good job, at least Aizen's endgame made fucking sense!
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