great story. a bit different from many. thanks

promising but ended too tamely, as if the author lost interest

Lets make the four witches snap their fingers and summon Pettigrew so Sirius can be free...

Dude... john constantine, jason blood, genkai and the yu yu hakusho crew, lucifer his posse, and probably slenderman... you wove them in wonderfully. I don't know who else you snuck in, but them's some awesome cameos. Actually i think you snuck yugi's grandpa in. No other things rang a bell for me. Fav-ing is in this fic's immediate future

Great story! I didn’t get all the references, but I feel like I got most of them.

Oh. My. God. I really freaking loved this. I know there was references to Lucifer, Grim, I think the anime Reborn Hitman, and Creepypasta. There was more but I couldn't quite remember or I didn't know. I loved when Sirius made the comment about her looking like a 90's movie teen witch. It made me think of the Craft. If you could tell me the others I'd appreciate it. I'm hoping it's that anime...
LBR

this was stupid and frustrating as hell to read

damn it, now I need to go binge Chaotic again. thanks a lot!

Chaotic. damn. didn't expect that one. probably should have.

Walter and Sir Integra Helsing

I'm in love! a reference to the Ishtars. I pronounce this to be great, and if I'm going to give you tit for tat, it will even be... IN THE NAME OF THE KING! (Atem[u])

Well, I am sorry to hear you got a ton of flack for the previous chapter. I was confused for 15 seconds until I read that they were celebrating Harriet’s 16 birthday. So obviously...there had been a time skip! Whoa! Omg! Lol, sorry, couldn’t resist. I thought you dealt with the minutiae of all the running from place to place and resolved the Horcrux issue well. And then you continued through to the end.

Sucks to be them if they can’t handle something different, complete with (flashback begins and ends) and other screen/play script writing cues. You did a great job. Thanks for sharing and this is bookmarked as an all time favourite.

Another "Evil Dumbledore and his absurdly stupid allies get fucked by people who can do everything right" story.

Great 10/10

Are you planning on writing a sequel where the Order goes after Harriet?

Things went very fast here but as you wanted to end the story I can understand that.

Dumbles really is a vile bastard. JK may have tried to give us a hero, but what we got was a idiot suffering from self delusional arrogance and self righteousness.
Dumbles broke so many laws but justified it that as it was HIM doing it, that was alright.
Anyone who didn't agree with him was accused of 'going dark' to bring them back into line.
And he insisted the victim forgive their attacker, no matter what was done. Never understanding that only encourages the evil little monsters.