Lovely, lovely, just rewatching, as you do, and this is a great little .

Awesome story! Thanks for writing! :)

So glad to read a Salvation story. Love your understanding of the characters as individuals and how they work together.

Great story! This makes perfect sense, after what happened in that episode!

Very good. I enjoyed that.
I remember getting annoyed at that episode when he was wandering around clutching his ribs. I think I told him to take an aspirin at one point.
This tidied it up well.
Thank you.

Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa loved it hope theres more! so glad to see a new fic up u made my night ! :-)