This is such a good story. Can't wait for further chapters.

You're including the Omakes. Excellent. I can't wait for Peter's 'Prince Ali' parody.

This is a good reading version I look forward to more

Nice chapter and story so far.

please be nice to Jaune...

Ease up on Pyrrha pinching, slapping and otherwise hitting Jaune everytime he so much as exists near another woman. It's incredibly tiring and feels like I'm reading a disgusting Love Hina story. That isn't teasing, it's straight up abuse. Is that really how you interpreted Pyrrha's character?

Haha

Alright,
The opening of this chapter broke this reaction-fic for me.
There's teasing, rough-housing, slaptstick, and then there's outright bullying.
The interactions of the characters in this story can teeter back in forth all over the place but even I find them to be grossly out of line when it comes to Jaune.
While Jaune is an arch-type for a But-Monkey, using Tv-Tropes jargon, his treatment by his supposed friends crosses the lines into mean-spirited humor and is plainly uncomfortable to read.
Hunter or not, there is such a thing as a toxic relationship and abuse. I have trouble believing they even care for him as a friend with how they are written.
It would have been one thing if you were playing it for comedy but otherwise it's disturbing.

I am not the only one who has noted this and while you are free to do whatever you well please in your own writing using your characters as mouthpieces for your own biased opinion instead of a polite Author Note speaks volumes of your OWN character and attitude as an author.

Reviews are meant to help you become a better writer; I encourage you to find better ways to handle criticism.

Very good

damn. I feel bad for Jaune, it was all his families Gault that he was like this not him.

Wow, this is great!
How fast does this update? I see that this has been around for a year so is it one chapter a month or slightly faster?

well this is fun!

Good too see you and another chapter good author, it was great seeing them reacting to how Jaune in Professor Arc handled Coco as well as them reacting the whole Ozpin trying to be hip. Great work as always and cant wait to read another chapter.

Awesome story

Awesome