Reviews for Sea Girl - The Original
PJOBlackjack chapter 9 . 5/31
I'm rereading this and wondering how exactly can you wink sixty-six times? Don't your eyes get tired?
Guest chapter 17 . 2/14
Ahh you love MCU too much. Always putting in references. First after Bianca's death and now ending this with a flourish. But on another set of second thoughts, this chapter came before Bianca's death. Ahh never mind. And yeah it's been Hades of a ride. Last few chapters did have the chills I crave for. More or less, superb work. And you just gained yourself another loyal reader.
Guest chapter 16 . 2/14
Great story but 1590 out of 1600. Damn. Someone's gifted. I remember working my ass off the whole year and barely touching 1500's. And my extra circulars will probably let me down. By the way which field do you want to pursue? I know it's too personal of a question, you don't actually have to answer that. On second thoughts how would you probably answer... Dont mind me much. I can get carried away.
Guest chapter 15 . 2/14
Yeah Wisty felt more like fem! Jason with all that blacking out.
Guest chapter 14 . 2/14
There were so many things that I wanted to say. The good things about the chapters, what lacked, what could be easily improved and what not. But it seems you have skimmed apart all that by yourself with ease. Nice to see how much you have progressed, though. And love your ANs and the ease with which you connect. Didn't feel at even a single point that I want holding a conversation with you. It's good to know that I ain't the only member of Never Watched a Single Episode of GOT club.
Ajax chapter 7 . 1/30
This was also a nice story. Considering all of our was written in a month. But somehow, your ANs were the best parts of the chapter. I can see you being nostalgic about your writings and thinking Duh, how did I even write all this stuff.. And all the reasoning over why you did something is interesting to say the least.
Guest chapter 17 . 12/22/2019
While this story is definitely among the better fanfics, I am glad to see how much your writing has evolved. Sea Girl is among the best stories I have read. Nicely done. Kudos
Chronus101 chapter 17 . 12/19/2019
Loveeeeeeee the story
veryspecialagentriley chapter 17 . 11/11/2019
Love this story so much!
Tempest chapter 17 . 11/5/2019
Chapter on my birthday I feel so special! lol Thank you for an amazing story, this was fantastic, an amazing journey with Wisty and Artemis. And if you wanted to do an epilogue down the road, you could show Artemis meeting Sally, or Zeus and Apollo finding out about their relationship. Maybe? Anyway, I have to say this was one of the most memorable stories so thank you for this masterpiece!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2019
Update
weirdhead chapter 16 . 10/27/2019
Make Wisty scold Thalia and Luke, and probably make their hearts break. No shit of Loyalty is needed
Eternalking500 chapter 16 . 10/23/2019
great chapter, hope you update again soon, same with your other story sea girl.
Tempest chapter 16 . 10/23/2019
This chapter was amazing, absolutely fantastic thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2019
Update soon please
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