Kind of immersion breaking to have the outlaws oblivious to what vehicles are. The first car was invented in 1885, and even the characters in RDR2 had mentioned automobile in one of their chats (don’t remember exactly which one though).

I know you haven't updated since June, I just discovered this, and I love it. If you are able to, please continue this!

Please continue this!

I really hope you don't stop here. This is the only rdr2 story of its kind I could find. I really want to read more of it plz.

Please update this story

awesome work great ideas

Good work on this!

Interesting story so far

Dude I love this already. Time travel stories are the best, i really really hope to see more cause in 2019 the Van Der Linde Gang is gonna be the mother of all riots.

well i would love to see chapter 4

I love this! What an interesting idea. I do hope you continue this story!

..whelp, watched. I look forward to seeing our heroes adapt to a world where the age of the Outlaw has long since passed.

Nice another update, good chapter. Can’t wait for the next one

I was really hoping this would be updated soon and here it is! Looking forward to more!

You have a really solid idea and plot for the story, but the character relationships need to be revised, especially John and Arthur's. Because this is near the beginning of the game, the two have yet to bond. Make sure to add a clear character arc as well