*sigh*...where to begin? i loved the shit out of your story for the first 6-7 chapters. Part way through 7 though, asia started to get a little to manipulative, but it was still in line with your earlier depictions of her. Now however, she has taken to using pranks that aren't fun, funny, or in any way a trick...they are malicious and evil. And before someone says that they aren't, i have but to point out that at this point, asia feels its okay to use mind control, emotional manipulation, and heavy handed abuse of her powers to force, not ask, but force others to do as she and she alone pleases. This also completely shits on her "i'm a pacifist" stance that shes held almost the whole story.

why or when did she go from sweet, semi-innocent, prankster? (and yes, the dictionary says pranks can be evil i understand) As some have pointed out its in line with Kitsune, but i have to point out a passage for even the evil version: Kitsune are often portrayed as wild, occasionally wicked foxes, who delight in mischief, pranks, or evil. Even so, they are known to keep their promises, repay any debts, and remember friendships.) So as stated here even if we're using the dark style of the kitsune (likely kurama's influence if this is correct) she wouldn't be turning these traits towards her family, but her family seem to be the only people she seeks to use them on.

After reading chapter 10, i don't think i'm coming back for any future chapters. M'Sorry, you have a great story, but, you gave up the plot of naruto making humans strong to stand on their own, a world of semi-peace, and the development of the others, for a super heavy and very negative focus on asia, her ever downward spiral towards darkness, and this not even comical anymore obsession with a mother harem for her father, whom she doesn't even care for his opinion on. How did she lose the values her mother who was with her till she was (cant remember...10?) that made her a pacifist an one who cares to this?! this is really the only thing in the whole fic that just turns me off from it an pisses on the whole thing!

Again, sorry, long winded rant aside, if you plan to do a rewrite or some how redeem the mistake she has become let me know ill come back, if not, thanks for the first 7 chapters, they were a pleasure to read.

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time to drop this series

this ooc asia is a pain in the ass and make the story worst

more please

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Is there a reason Naruto didn't just bring her back from the dead using Sasuke's rinnegan?

update?

Naruto is way too soft on Asia that it’s getting annoying. And Kurama was part of the prank that left them unable to help when Asia was attacked but he doesn’t get punished either?

Oh man I died laughing because of this fanfic I love it! Please continue this to the end!