Let me guess: either you have Covid-19 or you gave up writting it?

As much as I love this perspective of Bella teaming up with Victoria, it seems too inconsistent with her nature not taking advantage of Bella by torturing and killing her, let alone changing her! Last but not least, there are still a lot of blindspots on your story considering both time and space. Though I like this story, it stills far far from being one of the best!

It's sure taking you a LONG time to update!

Why is this Drama/Angst? Why not Fantasy/Adventure?

I wouldn't mind if this were a BellaXFred story!

I see some improvement in these last chapters, still you're leaving a lot to be desired! Like I said before, add more details:
How does she and other characters look like? How does she hunts or fights? etc...

Once again, check these fanfics:
"A Life Once Lived" by micbb
"No choice" by glasscannon
"The Vampire's Alliance" by The VII Duchess
(Trust me, they're worth it!)

Bella’s gift topped Fred’s and freaked him out. :-) Raoul is ready to chomp or rip Bella to pieces. She better let her inner crazy vamp loose! Looking forward to reading more.

I love love love revenge stories like this! I haven't seen this angle before where Bella joins Victoria and the newborn army and I'm excited to read more

update please. this is good

RIP another story

So did she kill the bastard or not? Couldn't you just show how she "played" with him? What about the girl, is she ok?

PS: Vampires in Twilight don't tap their feet or make unnecessary movements when bored. They get completely still/immobile like statues, especially when stressed.

So, basically, Bella just noticed her skin sparkling at sunlight, about more than a week after her awake?
Also, vampires don't loose breath considering they don't need to breed.

Aside from that, it was good chapter, though it could still be better, giving more details not only about the fight, but the enviroment and their surroundings as well. That cover story for Bella, being mated with Laurent and wanting revenge is brilliant!

I prefer left aligned. The fic is great so far.

I'll take it they aren't in Forks anymore, considering it's part of the wolfs' territoty, so they wouldn't running around and hunting without any worries. Question is: where exactly are they staying?

It's not bad, but it stills too short and vague. Be more specific and add more details, especially about the fights. Also, you've yet to write anything about Bella's appearence after the change, if you do, make sure you focuse on the diferences between "human" Bella and "vampire" Bella in comparison, instead of emphasizing her beauty too much, like Stephanie did in BD.

Here's a suggestion, check these two fanfics for inspiration:

"A Life Once Lived" by micbb (for Bella's physical description and character growth)
"The Vampire's Alliance" by The VII Duchess (more insight about vampire world and tactical combat)