Reviews for Withering Away
AsketronNidavellir8 chapter 6 . 7/26
Ohmilord I love how you made Loki give this crash course of how the universe works to three Midgardians by using a piece of paper and a pencil and two crazy math equations. That was genius, I love how I can sort of actually understand what you are describing even though it's insanely crazy awesome and hurts my brain XD
lady kae chapter 1 . 7/23
it makes sense
AsketronNidavellir8 chapter 10 . 6/2
By the Norns and all that is golden, Lodestar, you've done it again. Blew my head up with your genius. I grovel unrestrainedly before your sheer genius and dedication! God bless you, Lodestar. Keep writing!
awriterhiding chapter 10 . 4/25
Ah, you did fix it after all. Wonderful, beautiful, heart-wrenching, and yet with a satisfying conclusion. So glad Tony survived, and SOOO glad Bruce/Hulk survived. Was shocked to learn of Natasha's sight. The science and research throughout this story have been incredible and accurate, you've certainly got a knack for sci-fi.
From one writer to another, I'd give you a little trick I've learned for keeping 'To' and 'too' separated. Too has TOO many 'o's while you take the shortcut to get there.
Oh, and it's nice to know that I've been calling my sisters brother this whole time...
icecatfire chapter 7 . 1/6
... I agree with this one commenter, I want to see the conversation between Loki and Frigga. Though the glimpse/hint of it we DID see was TOUCHING. :3 I FELT for Loki and Thor, though, when Loki was forced to tell Thor that they couldn't save her; and I LOVE him defending his Brother. :D
IsobelMarvel88 chapter 10 . 1/5
Wow. Loved this fic. You packed so much in and it flowed very well. Thoroughly enjoyed it! Thank you xx loved the twists regarding the convergence ect too!
meladi1 chapter 5 . 10/29/2019
This whole chapter made me realise that if Steve
Has to put the stones back where they found them, does that mean he had to stab the Aether into Jane again? Poor Jane, first chased by a raccoon, stabbed, freed from the Aether and then suddenly Cap is there to stab her again xD
meladi1 chapter 4 . 10/29/2019
Oooh so much stuff went down, nice! I was worried about Nebula but you handled it nicely. Also, technically Thor could call Stormbreaker to him ,since it has probably just been floating in space all these years. Or wait, I don't remember, can Stormbreaker be summoned?
jellybean chapter 10 . 10/26/2019
You should have ended with thor saying "You know brother, you are right , the sun is shining on us again."
However it is a very nice and beautifully wriiten fanfic!
FigurativelyDying chapter 10 . 10/5/2019
Can't believe this is the end, this was so good. I love thor's small arc in this story and the moments between him and loki. You write their relationship really well
VersatilePlanet chapter 10 . 9/16/2019
Well, this was a waste of time one simple fucking and is blown out of fucking proportion! like what the hell fuck of you fucking faggot!
Whirlwind421 chapter 10 . 9/3/2019
I liked how you didn't kill off anybody and how everyone got to live, despite the cost of arms and whatnot. Now, you just need to bring back Vision in one of your sequels. I quite enjoyed this last chapter. Thank you for such a good read. (Hugs to you as well!) And the most important part was Loki lived and Thor can speak again too. And Tony didn't die! I loved the Tony/Peter reunion. And how they all held hands at the end there for the infinity snap. That was great!
Whirlwind421 chapter 9 . 9/2/2019
*Shrieks in excitement* Thor totally should have killed Thanos! I like this story better.
Whirlwind421 chapter 8 . 9/1/2019
OH NO! You are going to kill someone next chapter. I will cry in my soul a little bit! Great chapter. But, when did Loki get the Aether into him?
trontroy chapter 2 . 8/29/2019
I have only read chapter 1 and I love what Thor is suggesting... how he wants to save his brother in addition to the rest of the individuals wiped by Thanos’ snap. Will try my best not to binge read this but instead savour the story. I think you have a pretty good writing style so I am looking forward to read the rest of the story.
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