Another mistake bad authors do is GIVE POWER and then TAKE IT AWAY

Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update

That sounded better coming out of Harry..

Aww com'n man, dialogue from different people go in separate paragraphs! This is like the absolute basics of writing.

THIS IS A GREAT STORY!

I hope you post new chapters soon.

Best Regards,Ray

Well this story sucks , are u a moron or what one second he can't apparate and then next he can...u can't even stick to Ur rules in this story...and how the hell there is some kind of wall around his magical core I don't think there was any magical there who could have bound his magic and what the fuck...he is supposed to have absorbed the elder wand and before that he spent 2 centuries learning more magic and Ur saying he didn't lean alternative ways of using magic...what the bloody hell if Ur adding him in the story then it shud not follow the same path as the cannon, if not then what the point of adding him to the story it just feels like the rehash of cannon with a new character for a joy ride...fuck this sucks and I'm only on second chap...

Seriously what the fuck...if u had to make the dumbass handicapped then u shud not have shown him to be very powerful...and what the fuck kind of metal is embedded in his arms that stops him from using his magic normally...u can't be serious that there were some kind of exotic metal in that Xplosion...it just feels like a forced cop out to put him in that cave with Tony and yinsen and just fucks up the story...if this guy is supposed to face thanos than the universe is already doomed...I mean iron monger wud piss on this Harry and he will shrivel up and die and Ur talking about him being in power nearly equal to a top tier cosmic entity...what a joke...

Enjoying this so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.

Glad to see you writing again, looking forward to seeing what else Harry presence does to screw with Thanos' plans next.

I honestly thought you forgot about clint for a second until you mentioned him near the end. I do love how Harry has kind of taken the leader position and both steve and Tony are his right and left hands. I do want to be clear on something.. When Harry recieve the staff did that mean the metal in his arms no longer posed a problem for him or did he burn through them or something? From when I can tell his bracers are only needed in order to help him better control his magic and flight, you haven't mentioned anything about the metal. I didn't know if it dissapeared or if the healers in Asgard were able to get it out or what. Anyway, I greatly enjoyed this story so far and I look forward to what you have planned for both Loki's and Bucky's mind control and if Harry can do anything about it!

Your prologue and first chapter have very different writing styles. Unsure if you're currently in the process of rewriting or it was a prompt that you've used. I'll keep an eye out to see if it'll be updated further.

I'm getting irritated by your stupidity with shrapnel in harry's arms! Is it going to be ignored? It's not as life threatening as Stark, they can easily remove them with how advance was their tech and medic in that world. and the fact you thought it's was awesome to make a Harry as an Iron man copy is gratting on my nerves. badbye.

idk if you threw bruce into the sun im sure hed die, any pairings for harry ? id say sif and or wanda, maybe carol

harry cant ensure that things go the way they want because his arrival has already changed everything

how does 3300 and 3300 combined make 7500? am i thinking wrong? lol could be its like 3 am and im tired lol