Reviews for The Immortal Champion of Outworld
Spidey's1437 chapter 12 . 8/1
Now, this is simply brilliant. I'm quite enjoying this, specially the fight or the action scenes, they are written so very well. I can actually picture them as I read it. Very interesting lot of people. Very different relationships that Peter is sharing with everyone. The tension seems to be keep intensifying between jade and Peter. And I'm curious about the relationship between Peter and juri? It's more than just sex but what is it? Something like close friends finding solace in each other but no romantic touch to it? Sending her away was disappointing. But let's see what goes ahead, really intrigued. Please, update soon. Freaking amazing story.
Thank you.
Echo Five chapter 12 . 7/26
If you think Peter was bad enough. It would be Deadpool that she would be more worried about. I know that he probably won't make an appearance in this story, but what would happen of Sonya and Deadpool were in the same room with Wade making wisecracks nonstop?
Silber D. Wolf chapter 12 . 7/20
Great
JC chapter 12 . 7/17
Great love interaction between Johnny and Peter,I hope Johnny,s Green Glow will healed him,He and Soyal will hook-up and have Cassie Cage she was Great In Mortal Kombat 10 and 11,I love to see her Pair with Peter.

I hope You do a Other Mortal Kombat story where Peter is part of Cassie Cage,s team in Mk10 and pair with Her.
Maximess chapter 12 . 7/14
is peter going to have a chance to go to "earth realm" be cool to see interact with dare devil or anyone from marvel. so similar to my previous question but on the marvel side.
TigerJacob chapter 2 . 7/13
Sheer skill but let's himself get stabbed and freaks out during the battle, doesn't sound like a immortal champion and more like naruto uzumaki when he was a genin. Mix that with the repeated grammar errors and I think this is the first fic I've been legitimately disappointed by.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12
Add mileena
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9
Can u add nitara
I craft experiences chapter 12 . 7/4
This chapter was a lot of fun
117 chapter 12 . 7/3
Will Cassie even be born? Because that d... kick says otherwise
jtcookie96 chapter 12 . 7/3
Now this was a great chapter, great scene with Jade and Peter, and you didn't disappoint with Johnnys banter with Peters. Anyone else feeling the love the two love birds got webbed up? Jokes aside, thanks for the horrific images of Shao Kahn smiling and Shang Tsung being naked
SNESgenesisguy chapter 12 . 7/2
I know Sonya blade isn't in the harem but is cassie cage in the harem
Snesgenesisguy chapter 12 . 7/2
I kno
JCarrasco chapter 12 . 7/3
Keep it up I love this story please.
Tsuki-no-Hazama Hime chapter 12 . 7/3
glory to the Outworld, my friend it's a long time ago that I proposed we make alliance with Gunman, Musicman50 and anyone who has great Spiderman stories... but yeah... it was just my hope... anyway I love your Idea... no matter what... Pete doesn't need to defect to Earthrealm, it will be Kitana's doing
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