Ajajaja que desmadre pasa aqui, muchos momentos buenos anda lincoln y loan la bolsa de boxeo

This is one of the best SK or TLH stories that Ive read so far.

I really liked the story. You showed a little of the comedy we expected of a story with Loudcest, but you played the heart-warming moments pretty well. What's more, the ending really touched my heartstring. Great job!

This was fun and hilarious, though I was slightly disappointed that we didn't get to see Lisa's reaction to Lulu Loud showing up.

Well Done!

live the happy endings, lupa and loan are happy with that enough for me

Amazing love this storie thanks a lot 3

thanks for the story it has been interesting and entertaining, I liked the end, all existing in the same reality, luck with your other stories, the other story that I look forward to is: "In Cest We Trust", luck

Usually I tend to avoid sin kids stories not by some aversion to them or Loudcest theme but because I'm so very tired of "drama" or "realistic" sin kids stories that are nothing more than dramafest fics usually centered in the likes of Lemy Loud, ugh. But your fic was surprisingly very fun to read, very wholesome, amusing and clever. It was a very enjoyable breath of fresh air.

You might be the best autor in Loud House fandom tbh.

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Dont use sinkids

Great chapter and all together very enjoyable story. :)

Sigh... Like most time travel plots, I'm kinda confused.

Oh well. Nice end.

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Awww. That farewell scene with Lupa was so cute. Honestly I was really surprised by how sweet and heartfelt this story ended up being with what a wacky premise it has. I guess it just goes to show a good writer can really get the most out of any idea; I thought it would just be a fun, silly romp but the way you carefully crafted everyone's relationships and painted out their character arcs really infused it with a surprising amount of sincerity. I only wish we could have spent more time with everyone and gotten a closer look at how the sisters' coming to terms with their incest kids and the sudden possibility of marrying their little brother and living happily ever after as a beautiful family being thrown so starkly in their face. I respect your feelings though that eventually it might wear thin, especially since there were more kids every chapter and I understand there was only so much time and energy you could spend fleshing them all out, plus once the web started expanding outside of the Loud family and their friends Lincoln would have probably been pulled in too many directions to get much out of him on an individual relationship level. Still, what we did get was still great stuff, and there's certainly something be said for a story that maintains it's initial quality the entire way through like this one does.

Something else that certainly bears mention is that twist! I completely didn't see it coming! There was so much plot momentum hurled towards the dimension-hopping aspect since early on that it never ocurred to me, not even once, that it could have possibly been misdirection and one of the daughters could have been time traveling instead. That was really crafty narrative trickery, you totally got the better of me. it's not like it was some contrived dishonest climax that came out of nowhere either, when viewed in retrospect when Lupa surfaces in the story her journey is clearly framed in a far more suspicious light than the other girls'! Well done, man.

Anyway, this was a wonderfully entertaining fic. The central plot was intriguing and the way you told the story was all at once fun, clever and heartwarming. Between this, Zap, In Cest We Trust and others I've really become a fan of your work. Thanks so much for writing this.