I can kind of understand what you are going through I have an IQ of 195 but I don't know how to communicate with others and was in a coma for 2 years but ignore the hate and focus on the positive your a great writer and I hope you continue the story please update

Hey man, just ignore the hate they throw at you. This is a really great story and there is hardly any grammar mistakes in it. while they hate at it they can never even write something as good as this. The only thing I dislike is how Naruto now hates Jiraiya. The reason Jiraiya wasn't there for Naruto was because it would be to suspicious for Naruto. "Why is the orphan kid living with the master of Minato?" Many of Minato's enemies will now about Naruto and would want revenge through killing Naruto. That is one of the reasons he was never told about his family in case someone overheard it.

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Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

I am super happy that you have decided to keep writing this story, I feel like the concept is original!
Though, I haven't read more than perhaps 2 To Love Ru x Naruto FanFictions so yeah.

The fact that the Elemental Nations isn't out of the picture makes me happy, while you might not do it... I would like to see Naruto go ape shit on some stupid Ninjas, what they have done? Who knows.

But I am curious about how many girls from the Elemental Nations are interested in him? Might not be any from Konoha but perhaps Temari from Suna, Samui from Kumo?

Keep it up and well ignore the haters, they will always be there and honestly their opinion doesn't matter, you will have the ones that are interested and those who like the story through this story I just know it!

This is an interesting story. As for the previous chapter's author's notes, I don't see anything wrong with 'Riko' being more accepting of a harem than Rito. There's a reason why harem scenarios usually play out in a multi-female storyline, because as much as humans try to deny it, deep down, we're primal creatures with primal instincts and are only influenced by our environment. Harems and polygamy are considered wrong today only because there's laws against them, back in the day, a man having multiple women was pretty common, and it's due to a mixture of our primal instincts as animals and the influence of our society.

As for the direction of this story, I really hope there is some ninja ass-kicking in it, I LOVE these stories where Naruto goes to another cross-over realm and is followed by his former 'comrades' sent to capture him, only for him to completely and utterly decimate them. I only wish you kept Sasuke alive so I could read about him getting decimated. Due to how crappy canon ended, I can't get enough of fanfics with Sasuke getting his ass handed to him. The ending of canon made no sense to me, yeah, yeah, Sasuke had his little 'cheat-code monkey eyes', but Naruto was pure power incarnate, the guy destroyed dimensions with his Elemental Rasengans, and he has trouble beating Sasuke's Chidori and Susano'o?! I call bullshit! It was like they OP'd Naruto when he fought Kaguya, but had to nerf him for Madara and Sasuke, proving what I've been saying all along...

Kishimoto wants to take it up the ass from an Uchiha.

If you truly have all the mental disabilities you stated above, then I'm more impressed with your story. Sure the dialogue and everything is a bit cheesy and childish, but your spelling and grammar is top notch, I'm guessing that's probably due to your OCD, I'm kind of like that when it comes to the subject too. To the point I become annoyed when someone sends me a text with too much 'LOL', 'OMG', 'WTF', or using numbers instead of words like '4' for 'for' and '2' for 'to' or 'too', it honestly annoys me, I can understand once or twice in a message, but I'm not paid to translate an entire message of text lingo.

As I said though, your story is well written. As for constructive criticism, I'd say 'mature' it a little. For example, in your story Naruto has killed, he killed Sasuke, and as such is a 'killer'. A killer, whether they're a murderer or a soldier, is not going to blush around someone and be socially awkward, that's one thing I hated about how they depicted Yami. Yami was an assassin, she's not going to be bothered if someone sees her panties. I could understand HER social awkwardness because SHE had been raised to view all people as potential targets, Naruto on the other hand has some social skills.

However I also don't see Naruto at this point in his life being bothered by a naked Lala or trying to console people crying over small things, maybe if this were canon Naruto, but this is Naruto who killed Sasuke. I also don't see him as being TOO kind to people, I can understand how he may think the girls are cute and adorable, and I can see him viciously defending them, but I don't see him coddling them. Keep in mind, Naruto doesn't even coddle his kids in Boruto, he damn sure isn't about to coddle some teenagers. I would see him being more of a merciless tease to the girls but willing to defend them simply because he's a ninja and he's been trained to protect civilians.

Im sure he will have a change of heart for that gender confused cutie soon enough lol.

Good chapter, I want to see the next part.

I very much like the idea of Yandere!Lala. I thoroughly enjoy reading/watching Yanderes in fiction, and having Naruto engaged to one, technically, tickles me pink. I hope to see more of these moments.

Great chapter looking forward to more

Thanks for the update.
Magnificent chapter.
I really enjoyed rereading the story.
Keep it up and have a good weekend.
Greetings.

i enjoy your story it is very well written the main thing im curious about is are kaguya and mikan in the harem

Ren's presence will be interesting.

How is Naruto going to dodge the entire world from discovering his secrets if he keeps shouting them to large groups of people he hardly knows? You keep describing him as wanting to keep things close to the chest, but he makes zero effort to hide anything. Four chapters in and he has outed himself to the entire school.

On another note, Lala being all yandere is pretty amusing.

I like the detail and length of chapters, however I feel the CRA bit is unnecessary. Even if it was a thing in Konoha, he's well out of their juristiction. And the new world he has entered doesn't have "clans," so what's the point of rebuilding? You already have the galactic emperor harem thing, no need to load the CRA fanfiction cliché on top of it. I'd lay off the clan bit in future explanations.

Also, his defense of Kaguya amounted to "yeah, she tried to kill me, destroy the world, enslave all humanity, and her sealing drove my life so far in the crapper that I had to leave everything I knew to start again in lands unknown...but she's really hot, so whatever." That's a fairly horndog response to someone you seem to be trying to portray as not a horndog. It might be a better idea to swing it as "we're stuck together, so I wanna show her that people aren't as terrible as she thinks. I can't do that if I hold a grudge."

You have multiple questions where Naruto just repeats himself, if you find yourself re-typing something you just typed a paragraph or two ago, you should probably cut that bit.

Despite all that, I like the story you are trying to tell, and look forward to reading more!