I like your story. I did find it a bit confusing at times I’ve watched the entire series in the last 6 months but they were still questions that I couldn’t put together I didn’t realize what happened in episode four or five or six it was just a little bit confusing. I think in the beginning of the Beginning of the chapter you could kind of give a entire overview of what happened in that episode that way it would be easier to follow along. And I don’t think I would’ve taken away from your story to use some of the dialogue from the actual episodes. We don’t have to type it out you can get that stuff off line. Thanks for sharing your story I enjoyed it and look forward to the sequels.

A MUCH better way to reveal to Dawn who and what she is. Thank you!

Si seulement ça c était passer comme ça

J adore la relation de spike et dawn

Trop mignon

Voilà comment ça aurait du se passer o lieu qu elle essaie de lui courir apres

I enjoyed reading this fanfic so much. I’ve always wondered what would have happened if Buffy and Spike were more honest with each other in season 5 and took things slowly. I also really liked how much humor you included. I’m excited that you’re continuing with season 6.

great story

SCREAMING omg I'm excited hun. So glad! Don't worry about deadlines, I'm sure we're all waiting on the edges of our seats either way!

YES! I would love more! :D

Wow. This is so good! I feel like it’s the real show! Great writing skills. A little bit more imagery such as touch, taste, and smells would be nice. Keep it up :)

loved the ending and yes will read if you continue it . very enjoyable and thank you

I am very interested in a continuation this whole thing was perfect also I really want to see Angel's reaction to spike those are always fun to read about in fanfiction

Definitely continue. I love this so much!

Oh noooo! Pleaaaaaaase don’t make her die! Have Spike save the day somehow! Pleaaaaaaase! And more please! This is amazing!