shet i just realize naruto got banged by an milleniums old milf

Was kinda hoping Salem would freak Raven out further by using some more innuendo, that was amusing- Great chapter though, and dammit Blake, tell them already!

Well hopefully you won't make Naruto work with Ozpin because i have came to liking this fic of yours and i really hate type people like Ozpin and Dumbledore even if its for a greater good bullshit

Great chapter, good update

it was sitll really good please keep u the good work and write for white fire as well that story is awesome!

Very good work

Interesting chapter! a bit all over the place, but i think some nice points were hit on.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)

I've been looking forward to this update since the last one, this is onemof my favourite fics, and yet again you've delivered another good one. The interactions between Raven and Salem, and Naruto and Ozpin, where well written and interesting.

I did notice just a couple of spelling mistakes that are very easy to over look when proof reading your own work. In the first paragraph you have Naruto thinking about what hes learning at Beacon and have written 'every major battle of the great was was,' so just missed the war being written as was.

I also noticed you had 'Common' said several times when I think what you mean is 'come on.' Again though that is very easy to overlook and an easy mistake to make.

I really enjoy reading every update of this, so thank you for writing something so entertaining

Loved the chapter

But you see now I can’t wait for the next one haha

Salem was being literal people. Its lewd handholding.

Ok

You may call it a mess, but even then it was a wonderful mess! It was super fun, you know? I guess being an author gives you higher standards, for me it's progress made smut good chapter, hahaha.

Salem's being really proactive here, what a change of pace... no brooding in the background for this girl! Hope something comes out of it, there's too little love for evil empress types. It's going to be fun seeing how everyone reacts to Salem showing interest in some random huntsman trainee.

Damn, I'm curious about how the conversation with Ozpin's going to go... for how much I like Salem's appearances, Ozpin's always been more on the annoying side for me. It seems like he never gives enough information so that you can trust him, you know? Comes off as more dickish than anything, at least Dumbledore had the whole 'kindly grandfather' thing going on...

So a filler of sorts with a small hint of whats to come then? Its fine dude, whatever it takes to push the plot forward although now itd be funny if Salem and our protagonist hooked up even for abit lol. Knowing Yang though I think she'd be ok with it...

Jaja excelente capitulo, y esas palabras de salen me intrigan.

El naruto original estuvo vivo durante una epoca donde salen aún era humana o luego de convertirse en la reina de los grimm?

This chapter was pretty great, don't know what you're on about.