I just splurged through book 1 and 2 of Undying Fire and am working on the third now. Really enjoy fics focused on Zuko's journey, and this is a good one! I especially enjoyed the focus placed on Aang and Zuko's relationship, since I feel a lot of authors neglect that. Looking forward to finishing the rest of the series, you did a good job with these stories.

I’m so glad I found this story again! I had been following it when it was just one story and somehow when it was broken up I lost it. It took awhile to find it again and I can’t wait to read the now completed story! Great premise.

Ooooh this is off to a good start. It's well-written and everyone is in character and the development feels really believable. For all his attempts to find nonviolent solutions, it makes so much sense for the destruction of the Fire Nation fleet to affect Aang deeply and even though the Fire Nation was the aggressor, Zuko's anger is justified too. I can't wait to see where this series is going.

First of all, I applaud you for humanizing the Fire Nation Soldiers. An ancestor of mine was a japanese soldier from the WW2 and he didn't really wanted to be there in the war (He later married a local woman in the southeast asjan island he was dispatched in). In the end, the soldiers were the one that suffered over the ambitions of one man, the innocent suffering more than anyone. War is ugly and not at all black and white. Both sides always suffers tremendously. And its sad that some are so obsessed in defining who was fully wrong and fully right when it comes to wars.

I like Yagoda or however you spell the older waterbender healer's name.

Thank you for this story, it’s hard to find stories that aren’t too focused on relationships and is slowburn while also being zutara, i seem to ask for too much but I enjoyed the story uwu

Wow great ending, the sinking of the fire navy by the ocean spirt/avatar is one of the defining moments in the first half of the series. One small note, I’m in the military, once you put on that uniform, your “fair game” in terms of being killed by enemy action. So that part of Zuko’s argument falls flat. Of corse the conscription angle was a good one to throw in Aang’s face. On to the next book!

Wow, battle at the spirt pool part 1. Very foolish for Zuko to dive through the tunnels. IRL that probably would have killed him.

Chapter 4, all fun and games in avatar land, while Zuko tries a little thing called character development.

Chapter 2 is looking good, Iroh is great.

I’ll be bingeing this story now, can’t wait to read your take on ‘fire healer’.

Came here after finishing up with Bk 5 and marked as favorite here as this is Bk 1 and the beginning of EVERYTHING!.
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Fyi to new readers, this was/is an amazing fic to read and although there are a number cliffhangers that make you wanna strangle a puppy, stick with it; it's totally worth it. ;)
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I have seen so many updates for this story lately but I lost my place of where I was exactly and so I decided to start over, lol. Thank you for breaking this up.I'm sorry I'm a lousy reviewer, I've been working on getting back to reading this story for MONTHSSSSS.

Thank you for doing all this and glad I could supply you with fresh reviews!