Holy crap you tied in the "never forget who you are" bit from Uras so well I got chills holy crap I'm excited

Another good story in the series. You did a good job writing how Zuko rediscovers himself, and I like how he's opening up to the Gaang. I would have liked a little more interaction between Zuko and Toph, she seems to be neglected compared to the others. The segment where Zuko's working his way through the Chakra's was very nicely done.

Really looking forward to Zuko's showdown with Azula. I want to see a fight, but there's some small opportunity for them to reconcile (which I'd also like to see). Between Zuko's memories of a happier and closer family and Azula's own inner conflict, I expect to see quite a dramatic confrontation in the end.

What a wonderful story! Thank you for writing.

This was incredible.

I really love how well written this is. I applaud your talent

This was really enjoyable and despite my early reservations after reading the summary, the amnesia surprised me in how well written it was. The character growth felt very realistic, especially the relationship between Aang and Zuko and Zuko's ultimate decision to stop trying to capture him. But that scene between Zuko and Iroh, where Zuko was hurt because Iroh had left him, now that was heartbreaking. Their relationship is my favorite in the whole show. Well done.

A well woven story. I’m on to the next book!

Omg this legit made me cry
You are an awesome writer
I can see it in the way you wrote Zuko’s, Aang, Katara and Iroh’s pain
Really made my heart ache

Amnesia? Tsk. Still, at least it's not caused by an injury or some such nonsense. It could be far more annoying than temporary semi-subconscious repression.

Alright, so this ended up evening out narratively and is overall good. I am still a little disappointed in how the first half had a lot of stuff that mirrored the show, and still think some things should have had more divergence and Zuko more growth in his skills alongside his character development.

8/10

So I’m a little disappointed so far. Nothing has really changed from canon in regards to substance. You might have added a neat little ability caveat, and given some good narrative and different scenes... but nothing has actually changed it the long run, except Zuko possibly hating Aang on a personal level. I just feel like there should be more divergence by this point, especially due to the amnesia plot point. Also, zuko’s healing ability outright sucks. It’s trash. What’s the point of it in this story other to not be used so far? I really really want to like this, and your writing is solid and entertaining, but with the lack of difference in so many aspects from the source material I might as well just watch the show.

Just stopping for a second to say I loved this book, and I’m off to the next one

Aww poor Iroh... Love what you’ve got so far!
That scene where Qiao notices Zuko doing a fire nation bow was a really nice touch :)

I bet Ty Lee is one of the hidden airbenders. I'm willing to risk a really good cooked steak

Loved the way book 2 ended, it made me all feels and warm inside