Liked the chapter, hope you keep orochimaru as a neutral evil at worst or neutral good at best, it would certainly be something not too many people do when using him/her. Anyways I got an idea for a couple of names, but my favorite one will be the only one I mention, and that is Mugetsu. It means moonless night, or sometime translators come up with void moon. But yeah, Mugetsu is my vote for a name for the oc.

Great work

Great job please continue

Looking forward to the next chapter. I really want to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!

Awesomeness

wait who is this itachi? why are there two itachi unless one is a person named after itachi im lost... and also you need to fix yourin the kage summit meeting

Try to edit your dialogue as it is confusing to know if it is part of the dialogue or narration

Congrats for your sister getting pregnant.
hope for the best
love the fic
-kamikisekai

like it

I’m sorry to have to point this out but you should’ve put the code geese bit into another story altogether for people who want to read it. I was happy that this would be a bit longer chapter until I realized half of it was about an anime I’ve never even watched before

been a while since I read this fic but hot damn you use blushes waaaaay to much. every other emotional expression in this chapter is a blush.

aside from that, it's pretty good tbh

I’m sorry I can’t continue. I want to, but your grammar is horrible. Get yourself a beta please.

Yang learned sage mode a bit too fast. Even for a maiden candidate, it's still a bit fast

I like it, it's interesting but it's barely understandable. I mean, I'm English is not my first language, but I can help you if you want to get it more legible? Send me a PM if you want me to help you out.
Ciao!

When you get back can you capitalize the remnant in the title so it looks the The Maelstrom of Remnant it’s a small detail but Jesus it’s annoying when I see it and kept me from reading it for awhile