This was a very good story, however it was a sad story but I'm relieved to know Camille, Elena and Christian all got what they deserved...hated Ana and her unborn son had to die..very good writing..

this is not the type of story I usually read but it was actually pretty refreshing to read something other than a HEA! thank you for a great story!

Holy hell what a ride. Welch for the win. The way this ended it made me cry. I was not expecting this. He really ruined it all and for what? An unchecked ego is truly is a dangerous thing. I'm going to need a minute or 15 to recover from this.

This was INTENSE. As was every chapter before this. Damn... Flynn came through!

Damn straight, Round 4 to Ana. I just wish she were alive to see it. Ros Bailey for the MF win.

REVENGE IS SO DANG SWEET... LIKE HONEY! I loved EVERYTHING about this chapter. Be still my beating heart!

I am a crying mess. Holy hell, this was gut wrenching... the pain and remorse CG felt, I ALMOST felt a little sorry for him but ugh... Krooela, you are making me feel all kinds of crazy emotions. I want to hug all the characters with the exception of that lying and cheating bastard.

So many emotions. CG doesn't deserve to be at the funeral IMO. I want to hug everyone. This is all so heartbeaking. I cannot wait to see what how Kate will destroy CG.

If this was real life, i'd be in jail for murdering CG and CD. My insides are burning with rage.

by the way, your story is amazing, i'm just really invested in it emotionally.

That letter was everything. I felt her anger and pain and it made me cry. Ugh, I hate CG so much right now.
I just want to hug Ray and Kate. I hope Taylor and Luke ruin him too.

I have no sympathy for this man. None whatsoever. My heart aches for Ana. Having to die that way and with all that grief and disappointment. Too little too fucking late.

my heart. I cannot handle all these bombs you're dropping on me. From Ana witnessing that horrid display to the CCTV footage of the last few weeks and then... I want to cry. I hope she makes it and rains down hell on the bastard that he is.

oh holy hell. holy MF hell. this god forsaken POS. He goes from that trash to Ana. Yep, definitely deserves to rot in hell.

CG is one fucked up asshole for this. So much for being 'monogamous' and THE NERVE to come home to Ana and use his god damn nightmare to have sex with her.

Master of Control my ass. I wish Taylor would beat the shit out of him.

I saw your your story while browsing, I think I want to read it again I want to to cry I want to relive the emotions I had while reading this beautiful sad story .