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This is a really good story! I absolutely love Connor, and this is actually the first time I've seen him take a route that didn't end in deviance (my friend and I always decided he was too precious and deserved emotions). I hope you continue because this shows a lot of promise.

This is amazing-and you are literally combining two of my favorite fandoms in the best possible way. I'm super intrigued with what you're cooking up because you chose a Connor that hasn't really accepted his deviation and that has ended the android liberation movement in his home world. His view of the world is just so interesting because he fails to realize that he's basically thawing and starting to refer to situations not entirely in terms of efficiency and percentages for his goals but now also with words framing things in terms of good or bad.

Regarding the characters themselves-wow. They all feel so in character, the dialogue and reactions across the two casts just work. I have loved every little interaction between Connor and all the others. His lack of social and sometimes emotional intelligence is hilarious, that scene with George and spilling out his chemical solution with an endearing smile? Gold. And that Peter views him hostilely so far has some interesting possible implications. Like, is it Connor's awkwardity, his affiliation with Flash, or is it his spidey senses picking up on Connor's willingness to eliminate what hinders him/ambivalence towards people?

On a side note, I'm, surprisingly enough, really enjoying his growing camaraderie with Flash. Because Connor is who he is we are seeing certain characters from objectively more neutral points of view and I'm thinking I'm going to see a good backstory and further character development there.

Anyways, I'm definitely looking forward to more.

I really liked the last bit! Fake mugging, Connor gut punching Tyler while mocking him. Nice

Oh... oh dear XD You're trying, Connor, but your socially awkward self is going about this the wrong way with Peter XD I just wish someone could see how misunderstood Connor was though. It's not his fault he's a programmed robot that doesn't understand social cues ahahaha. Thank you for the chapter!

Love this fanfic, already a fan of the marvel world and this made me actual watch full gameplay from Detroit become human, and Connor is best boy!

Great story.

Man Connor ain't playing these games, hes gotta do what hes gotta do, and anyone that gets in his way will just have to deal. You go bby I love u, kick who ya gotta kick

I see AMAZING potential for this story, but I haven’t felt what the characters have felt in great detail, haven’t felt the building tension during the fight scenes completely or seen any massive character development. I feel like the plot, and emotional tug on this story could be so much more, but I am looking forward to seeing how you progress this story still. It’s only just begun , so environmental building is probably your main priority at the moment :) Just a little constructive criticism, but otherwise I love this crossover a lot! Look forward to the following chapters and how Peter and Connor get to know each other better!

You' re back! Im so happy! Im miss your writing so much!

cool, I look forward to continuing

The "he will" at the end is so ominously friendly it's hilarious.
I love your Connor btw he's a badass. He seems pretty mission-oriented, but I can also see him going deviant eventually.
Stay safe, and update when you can!

I kindly ask for more chapters

Well, George sure punched-out his meal ticket

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH ITS BAAAAACK I LOVE THIS SO MUCH I AINT KIDDING I LEGIT PERKED UP WHEN I SAW THIS IN MY NOTIFICATIONS