Please, get a beta for the rewrite.

Please get a beta and change the awful spelling!

I feel like instead of small reactions and copying the original verbatim, its best to have an overarching direction. A direction they'll arrive at after the experience, if you do try again

Chapter 17 is missing

after the rewrite is fixed let me know when it is up

please keep up the awesome work and update this fanfic soon

Would be better with less empty reactions and less errors, nice enough though

excellent work on this chapter though I am surprised you didn't have nami react to her old self

Still not updated...

Not to sound rude or anything, but can you post faster? Most of the story is already wrote for ya, all you have to do is write the reactions and added commentary of the watchers, which shouldn’t take more than maybe a week per chapter give or take a few more days

I kinda can’t wait for everyone’s reactions to Luffy kicking Arlongs fishy blue ass, and the more crew members that join... shame that that story was put on rewrite right? It was already so far in the story getting close to Water 7 in all, which is close to the halfway point of the cannon’s grand line... hopefully the rewrite goes as far or even to Big Mom’s arc

Update the story please and work on your grammar. Can't wait to see what happens next. I can tell the next chapter is gonna be great. Please update the story

Been fun to watch, hope to see more.

Glad for the reactions but there could be so much more. Also the grammar errors kinda hurt when they go past 5. Seriously, what the heck.

When the next chapter? Please tell me that bellemere is going to be shock that nami sleeps with luffy. Update the story please

Excellent work on this chapter