Oh this, this is gonna be fun to read I cant wait to see what you'll do next

In all honesty this is freaking awesome!?
Seriously, great work man!

Anyways, since your "Viserys" has called Jorah out on his spying, and asked him to stop with the correspondence, it feels like a wasted opportunity if one were to look at it;

For one, Jorah could falsely inform the spy master of current affairs, make things still appear as they happened in the show/books, and to leave major info out.

Just saying, either way awesome story man!?

So good story.

ok I love the idea, but I do think it should happen a bit earlier in the story if only so poor Dany doesn't have to suffer so much:(

It's a great start I'm looking forward to more.

I love the premise. In all honesty, this has the potential to be your best written story to date.
I just feel that it need more attention so that the characters can be fleshed out more and show depth. You are conveying a general feel of the events through short chapters but that robs you and the reader of the dynamics involved in GOT...
I'm still loving the read regardless.

More pls. Maybe more deets pls. Danka shoon.

DAMN IT I WSNT MORE LONGER I NEED MOOORREEEEEEEEE...this is absolutely fantastic pl1ease keep writing and soon i thirst for more

I’m so so SO happy that you decided to continue this story!~ it may seem a bit much but I love this story and it’s concept. I’ve been dying to read a story with this type of concept and I haven’t been able to find any and I feared that this one might never go on, I’m really happy that it’s not the case~ I’ll be looking forward to your next update~

your writing is good, the narrative too ... the only thing I would like to ask is that the chapters be longer and that you don't leave the fic thanks for uploading it

I'm gonna be brutally honest with you... Danny should develop a serious crush for this Vyseris (it's up to you wether or not they actually become a couple).

Would you kindly go fucking kill yourself you unoriginal ninja dick sucking shithead?

Let it be Vis/Dany! It will pay off in drama and catharsis down the line if there are Dany viewpoint chapters in the future, for example, in the case that he is exiled with Jorah later on and they pick up Tyrion.

In other news, do I have permission to pick up this *concept* (not the story, obviously) and writing my own take? Many thanks.

Hmm!

I like Jorah.