Question: Was Hojo the reincarnation of Miroku's master?

Uwu I've finally finished and I have to say this sorry was.. Pretty amazing with the plot twists and all- However, I also have a little problem following in certain parts, like who's saying what sometimes. Nonetheless, I love how involved Miroku was in this and I love how you portrayed the characters so well!

You know I don't even remember what I expected when I started this story, but it certainly wasn't this. :)

While a bit difficult to follow in the beginning, that's mostly because of how intense this story is - the characters and how you write them. The plot isn't largely complicated or long for a story that's over 100k, but it doesn't seem that way because of, again, that intensity. It's well worth the read. I enjoyed it a great deal. It was incredibly hilarious in parts, touching in others, sweet, tense or exciting in yet others. The misunderstandings, the broken moments, the slow burn, the Kikyo-Inuyasha-Kagome triangle with just enough bitterness. The way Hojo just got on every guy's nerves without even trying. XD
I promptly went looking if you've got other stories this long, it was such a great read. :)

The twist was pretty good, but the style you wrote it in is quite confusing.

I still don't know why Inuyasha didn't just tell Kagome.

So why hasn't Inuyasha told Kagome that Hojo want to kill Shippo yet?

Other than for plot purposes, I mean.

What the fuck is going on?

While your story is funny, it is often hard to understand. You need to include a bit more detail. I'm sure you have it in your head about what is going on, but it isn't clearly written out.

For example, I don't know who is saying what, and when a person interrupt his own thoughts, I don't know what the completion is supposed to be.

"I wouldn't mind being reborn as one"

... I can't believe I didn't pick that up. What a twist. Really well done. Loved it.

I started this story just a few days ago, and I thought I knew what I could expect going in. Inuyasha's jealousy, Kagome trying to keep the peace, Hojo stumbling wide-eyed through this world and Kagome's secret life having to be babysat to avoid death.

Even when things became so much more complicated and darker, I thought I could at least make out the resolution.

I was so wrong. I've spent an hour just sitting here and piecing everything together in my head, staring at my phone like a moron.

Take solace, Miroku; you're not the only fool caught in the middle.

This was so well done I don't even know how to begin praising you for it.

Miroku, the lonely old man.
Ouch. I felt Miroku'd pain

If I haven't commented on this before it is to my shame for I reread it often. I've been writing my own stories and I realized how much I've neglected telling people how much I love theirs. So here I go, IT IS AWESOME! Carry on!

Oh man, I'd love to see more on this story, especially of Inuyasha and Kagome! Thank you for writing!

I just want to say this story is amazing! I think you've capture every character amazing so far! I can't wait to keep reading and see what else you have in store!

I loved this chapter! The Inuyasha and Miroku bonding. That was very funny. I feel so bad for Hojo.