Reviews for Parenting 101
AdriLAAAxo chapter 48 . 5/15
You should go for it regardless of whether the majority of your readers would like a second part. Everyones really stressed because of this Coronavirus crap, so if writing more of this verse helps in any way I say go right on ahead.
entity9silvergen chapter 48 . 4/18
I don't think it's necessary but I would read it. For me, the story ended kind of abruptly but it ended so long ago that any unease has faded. A part two could fill in any holes and give it a more finished feel.
RainbowStarMountain chapter 2 . 4/4
OMG. This is gold. The cutest part was when Madara flicked Sasuke on the forehead, and Sasuke's mixture of frown and a smile. Omg, so cute!
kingxavi101 chapter 1 . 1/27
why the fuck would you write this? its like just dicks in anothers dudes ass. who ever you are man, i hope your parents are proud of what you are. i would have persuaded you into repending but not all that religious myself. but generally you nasty.
AdriLAAAxo chapter 47 . 10/10/2019
Awesome! I loved how you sort of left it off to our imaginations on whether Indra or Asura take Madara and Hashirama back or let them stay. Overall, this is definitely one of my favorite Naruto stories.
Ita1412 chapter 47 . 10/10/2019
It is the last chapter? how sad. I love that story. But everything has to end sometimes. This chapter is a nice finish.
Touyas part was really good in my opinnion. It shows not only the first steps of a good friendship between sasuke and him. He got his brother back, too. A nice twist was the ability to deactivate the kekkei genkai of another Yato. I know that most oft the clanmembers with enough skill kann forcefully deactivate a kekkei genkai. It is sometimes necessary if a child can't stopp it after first activation.
The feast as nice to. Especially Kisames and Nejis little conversation.
I hope Madara and Hashirama won't have to leave now. The Mission is complete so I worry that Asura and Indra will take them with them again.
Esellyn chapter 47 . 10/10/2019
AWWWWW! Wait... does this mean Madara and Hashirama have to leave? *lip quivers* I don't want them to leave!
entity9silvergen chapter 47 . 10/10/2019
Thanks for the shoutout. Now that the story's done, time for an overall review.

I think I started reading this story when a bit less than 20 chapters were out. Binge read it, they were great. There's a pretty original idea behind the story and it's written pretty well. Not absolutely stunning or anything but a lot better than a lot of what I've read and seeing as this was the first story you posted on this site (I think), it's pretty good.

It felt like it was dragged out a bit and slowed down in the middle but there wasn't anything unnecessary. I expected it to go on for a bit longer but I think this is a good stopping point. There wasn't much else that needs to be done though the stuff at the end could've been developed a bit more.

My only real complaint is that the plot and characters lacked the complexity but I think the character development was smooth and it had an ending that had the story teeter off well.
AdriLAAAxo chapter 46 . 10/7/2019
You should crosspost this story on Wattpadyou’d get more reviews on it.
AdriLAAAxo chapter 38 . 10/7/2019
Mikoto Uchiha was Fugaku’s wife in canon!Naruto
AdriLAAAxo chapter 38 . 10/7/2019
I absolutely adore Sasuke and Konji’s relationship. It’s so cute seeing Sasuke dote on Konji like a big brother or mother hen does. It’s so sweet and at the same time a bit bittersweet at how messed up the entire situation is. Konji is such a sweet childhe doesn’t deserve such a cruel father like Orochimaru and a harsh childhood like that.
entity9silvergen chapter 46 . 10/2/2019
No worries, we understand. Looking forward to the updates.
Ita1412 chapter 45 . 9/24/2019
Konji is cute. Sasuke's plan is really thought out. I like that chapter. But I have found one sentence that don't fit.

As Itachi asks Konji if he knew how Sasuke plan to decide were the children are going, you wrote: seeing Konji shake his head.
But Itachi can't see in the moment till he transplanted his eyes back.

Otherwise this chapter is nice. I hope Konji can bond with Hashirama, Madara and Itachi.
Thanks for this wonderful story
Esellyn chapter 45 . 9/24/2019
Telepathy you can't shut off can be the worse. One of my characters has to deal with that sometimes and gets severe headaches when that occurs.
entity9silvergen chapter 45 . 9/24/2019
Sasuke's powers are cool. I love his original powers but these news ones will be an interesting read.
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