BABES!

You should be proud of this! It was written very well. Of course, I would like the second part; I think it would finish this story off well.
The idea of Valtor as a psychologist was scary at first, but the more I thought of it, the more it seemed absolutely fitting. You were right on that one. You aged everyone really well. Everyone was super believable about they would have acted a year and half later. I could see bloom being a mess, sky turning distant and terrible, Valtor actually doing some good, the girls being happy with their lives, etc. I didn’t anticipate the girls friendship falling apart, although it was entirely believable.
The irony of Valtor saving Bloom! Yeah, I laughed at that one as well! But still very believable. I always thought they were intertwined; for better or worse, good or evil. But they make a good pair. Their personalities and life experience compliment each other nicely.

Overall, very well done

That was an amazing chapter and story! Great job!