Adorei

me lika this story,it had me on edge to read last chapter to see how it end..glad i held on from start to finish

There were a few mistakes here and there but overall I really enjoyed this story. Don't give up on your writing and I'm sure you will see improvements in no time! Thanks for sharing your story with us! :)

I think the story is okay. It's a bit rushed.

I don’t think this was bad at all, for a first attempt it was pretty decent. I can tell you improved in just the few chapters you have here and I think it’s a good ending to the fic. I’d definitely be open to reading more from you.

It's short but a nice story. Wish that it's longer.