no puedo creerlo muy bueno la vdd es como si los mirara.
saludos-

oh dear Lord! very good !

A beautiful work of art. Such a clever story and perfect characterisation. I particularly liked John and the echo of Mary. The scene where Molly confronts John is just heartbreaking. I love how much all their friends and Mycroft have invested in trying to bring these two together but that in the end Sherlock has to find his own heart and acknowledge what everyone else recognizes. Fabulous and thank you for sharing.

Beautifully crafted essay - a work of art.

I imagine you chose your words and thought about each one as you wrote this piece - much life Mycroft thinks carefully before choosing his words to Sherlock.

Well done.

Beautiful! Ahhh wonderful wonderful! Well done

A sweet ending to an enthralling story, thank you.

The scene you pictured, with them sitting on the low brick wall, intimate but without touching, just feeling the delight of being together, was wonderful, so beautiful. And his laugh, free and true. Loved it.
The final part was quite different from the general tone of the story and it confused me a little at first. But I guess they've been dealing with sentiment for a while (at least a year).
Thank you so much for your story and for the pace!

I love it.

Is this the conclusion? If so, it's beautiful.

Oh my gooodness! AMAZING chapter! Flawless!

My jaw has hit the floor. How in the world is he going to get her out of there?

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I ope Molly will be ok!

It has warmed as much as it has broken my little heart. So raw, so emotional. Can't wait to read more about it

Oddly, this conversation under pressure of a loaded gun, seems to suit Molly and Sherlock. Their communication skills are perfect when they can use pretend names.

A man of infinite passion.