Reviews for The Mannis with a Plannis
Guachico chapter 14 . 6/9
Good afternoon,

Just wanted to drop you a line and let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed your story. you did a good job of managing the character portrayal of a man who has significant personality flaws coupled with a very pragmatic realism.

Thanks,
G.
Alias the Jester chapter 14 . 5/27
This is a really well done and engaging SI. Well worth the read, even unfinishedI hope that you'll be inspired to continue some day! Thanks for writing.
Cicer0 chapter 6 . 5/22
Just dissapointed
Suup chapter 14 . 5/11
I’m so incredibly disappointed this is abandoned. Found it today. It’s an extremely well written story, very few if any are done this well. He’s slightly overpowered, which I do like on occasion, rather than the si’s who don’t study magic in fantasy worlds for whatever strange reason. Magic is a fantastic force multiplier and I love that you aren’t nerfing it as a lot of people tend to do.
Hope you pick this one back up sometime.
Cheers for the great read!
Rogue15 chapter 14 . 5/7
Just binge read this last night. Really enjoying how you are approaching things. I am surprised by this point that he did not start his own kingdom. He could certainly use the support structure down the line. Having proven his experience can only help him later on.

Thanks for a very enjoyable read. Hope to see more of this later.
Moi chapter 14 . 5/2
Hope you continue this someday.
Brother Soos chapter 14 . 4/29
Truly a masterful creation. This story is one of my ablolute favoutites since 1 hour ago when i discovered it. A shame that the last Update is so long ago. I hope you will continue this masterpiece, it would be a crime if not xD.
Warden Commander of America chapter 14 . 4/24
I have just binge read this entire story very interesting so far please don't abandon this story.
naia1 chapter 14 . 4/18
plz update !
Everpeach chapter 14 . 4/13
I can't wait til the Mannis hands everyone their collective asses during the upcoming war, between an insanely well trained and loyal army and his absolute balls to the wall bullshit technological advantages.
tpowe15 chapter 14 . 4/11
Dude this is really good! Please continue this!
wbdionizio chapter 14 . 4/10
Update.
kirosyamcha chapter 11 . 3/21
Lewd not lude
kirosyamcha chapter 2 . 3/21
Chemical weapons
Bearzerker chapter 14 . 3/16
Excellent story, love that despite his future foresight and rather fast learning skills SI Stannis is not quite invincible, his men can still die like the swordmaster and Davos' son. I guess his plan is to use the Stepstones to pull a Griff and invade the Stormlands while Renly is away on the Reach? Start from Rain House and work his way to Storm's End and steal back the Stormlanders loyalty?

Been a long while since the last update so I'm a bit scared this story is dead but oh well I greatly enjoy what you've given us so far. Thank you for the wonderful story.
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