raven smirking at her boyfriend garfield you do know that since we met you have went out of your way to make me feel welcome to make me join in on whatever activity our friends are doing

raven saying to garfield aww i see that you will miss spending time alone in our bedroom

So far, it's really good and well written! I can't wait until the next chapter!

I find some interactions to be a bit off but I'm really intrigued by Raven's uncle and by BB's & Raven's relationship so I can't wait to see how things are gonna turn out