Omake: A voice from a nearby bed chimes in with "Normal is overrated anyway. So why bother even attempting to be it?"
Had either Hemione or Harriet decided to look for the other person in the Hospital Wing with them they would have noticed a Mauve haired tween male wearing a hospital gown sitting up reading a manga in one of the beds nearby.
The Manga? Full Metal Alchemist.
The Mauve Haired Male Tween? Matsuo Shun.

Nice! A fitting end for one Tom Marvolo Riddle, particularly with being roasted by his own Feindfire, and Harry unconsciously using a combination of his Phoenix and Owl abilities to find and destroy all of the Horcruxes, thereby ending Tom forever, also fulfilling the Prophecy at the same time to boot. With Harry transferring so much of his/her magic into Hermione, it might have been fun to see what other traits that she may have picked up from Harry. Thank You. TTFN

Kind of a simplistic ending to Voldemort...makes him rather not what he everyone else thought he was.

She turned into Trogdor?

This is really interesting! Please continue

A barely acceptable summary. You have to know that a summary is what attracts or repels viewers from your story. You should change the summary and make a more detailed one.

Now they've done it, they have Pissed her off, and they had better hope that Amelia catches them first. Hopefully, Amelia has a Healer or two on standby for just such of an eventuality, maybe even a couple of Unspeakables, to counteract the Curse that was used on Hermione. Thank You. TTFN

omake: Harry then looked up at the caster of the spell and growled "That was a huge mistake. ZA WARUDO!" Time stops for a brief time, and in that time Harry attacks the caster not only with brute force, but also with some choice spells of his own before returning to Hermione's side to see if there was anything that he may be able to do to help her.

Who attacked Hermione? Why did they attack Hermione?
If it was to get to Harry Potter in some way.. They did it.

One Death Eater either did not run, or chose to give leave a gift while fleeing; I do hope that the particular DE realizes how much of a mistake to attack Hermione was just created. I wonder what an angry, or even dark, Phoenix is capable of?

Now we know that Bella had something to do with Harry's predicament, so maybe they can get the relevant information from her (after they capture her that is). Fortunately, Harry had the wisdom to Mirror Call Sirius (unlike Canon), and also talked with Minerva. Now with Amelia, Sirius, Tonks, Kingsley, Minerva, and whatever Gred and Forge have cooked up, Things should be quite different down in the Dept of Mysteries this time. Whether or not Tom or Albus will show up is neither here or there (but would be a good Bonus). Thank You. TTFN

Awesome chapter.

Oooh things are getting good. More please!

Might want to put fem Harry in description or AN, not for me thanks.

Nobody seemed to comment that Harry performed all of those spells without a wand; which should tell you about her magical changes.

Next Time On "To Lose Control": The Trap is Sprung! But who is trapped? The trappers or the trappes(sp?)?